Did I already mention that you have re-creating very interesting characters? If not, then you have. I just want to leave some kind of note, to let you know that i am reading and still think that the story is great.

Sneaky! I love it!

Will read over the chapters you sent me, Em, and will make suggested corrections with 'track changes' turned on, so you can accept or reject my ideas as you see fit. I may also insert a comment here or there, but only if it is absolutely necessary. As a beta, I tend to focus mostly on grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Hope that's ok with you!

-Christina

Lovely new chapter

Woah...

Just...woah.

I wonder what's going to happen next.

Btw, glad you are feeling better (happier?) - you are aren't you?

Fabulous chappie! I have to say, I definetely did not expect Harry to be attacked by a bewitched McAllister. Severus' reaction was magnificent. Hope to see more soon!

This was a GREAT chapter. Snape loves Harry! I really like how Snape's acting and how he saved Harry from McAllistar. Good stuff. You've made their characters unique and perfect for eachother.

Thanks for the update. Hope to read more soon.

Utterly brill! keep writing and Happy Easter!

Lupa xx

Nice chapter. I usually don't see ol' Dumbles as being so squeakly clean as he appears in the books so it's cool to have him on the 'gray' side.

Poor Harry.

Great chapter! Update soon!

I liked the newest chapter :) cant wait for an update XOXO

Well, I've finally caught up to you on this fic. I am so into it! I look forward to the next chapter! (I know you just posted this one two days ago, but I am really enjoying the story)

I really, really love this story, so please don't take this wrong, but you are in DIRE need of reviewing the rules for the use of the perfect tenses in English, as your mistakes in the last couple of chapters (including Metamorphosis) are extremely distracting.

If you need a beta, I am here...

You have a GREAT sense of humour. So many little digs that make me chuckle!

Another excellent chapter, although some of your word choice errors stand out a bit in the last couple of chapters. No real biggie, but they get confusing sometimes.

A question, though. Considering that Voldemort knows of Severus' betrayal, why has he not summoned him to exact his revenge? One does not just quit the Death Eaters without severe consequences...

so, snape said he would? when do we get the snarry action? sorry about the stress in your life. if it helps any, i have enjoyed this chapter very much. please update soon.