Reviews for Pantogogue |
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![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite ongoing fictions. Well written and interesting please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chappie! Severus' reaction to Harry's anger was beyond fantastic, and seeing a glimpse of Viridian's personality in the staff meeting equally so. Hope to see more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Every chapter that I read gets me more and more addicted to this story. Which means that the longer I go on reading this, the more I scream in frustration at the end of every chapter! Please update soon! ~Kindali |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write such incredibly intense stories, without ever breaking characterization. Snape is a complex, dark character - JKR never really did him justice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() god, i loved this chapter! it just seemed that snape and harry both achieved another little bit of depth, and it was just fabulous! and now Harry's more emotional, which is brilliant. please please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic. I love the powerful Harry (His anger and beliefs seem so 'real'). The only thing i have to say...More please! |
![]() ![]() Another great chapter. I really like the relationship dynamics. I also enjoy how Snape's view of Harry has changed. You're one of only a handful of authors that can write a story with believable change in the characters and their estimation of eachother based on events. Thanks for updating! I look forward to reading more and finding out what Harry does about the vampires. |
![]() ![]() a very intersting chapter |
![]() ![]() Reads awkwardly. Some tense errors with your verbs, and the conversations are missing words. Perhaps limited third person would be better? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanna see some Malfoy revenge! Well, not against Snape, but still... |
![]() ![]() Another great update. I really enjoy what you've done to these two characters, and I especially like reading this from Snape's POV. Thanks for updating and sharing your fic with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I'm so glad that there was some progress in their relationship! (And I'm so happy that Harry is showing emotions towards Snape... even if it is sometimes hate :P It's progress!) I can't wait for you to update, so please do so soon! ~Kindali |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chappie! I especially loved the very few sentences of the chappie... the simple "Alright" was beyond perfect. Hope to see more soon! |
![]() ![]() Interesting story - though the pace is leaving me so frustrated! (But then the frustration is half the fun of any good Snarry.) Update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again...got to be one of the best stories i've read. Severus' character is fantastic! Just how i've always imagined his character to be like- minus getting people drunk mind you. When this is finihed i've no doubt it will be up there with 'The Best'. Good luck and hope to read more soon. Lupa x |