Reviews for Pantogogue |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic. Love your story so promise me you won't abandon it, ever! Lupax |
![]() ![]() I'm am likeing this story I really like Harry in this tale If you have chapters written I for one wqould like more to read as soon as you can Nanz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing is very descriptive. Almost too much so, for an after war scene. Yuck! But it sure added to your story. The upcoming bond between Draco and Harry is a unique twist and I look forward to seeing how that will turn out. Add Severus to the mix and it looks like things are going to get interesting. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay another chapter! ur brilliant for making it so long too! things are definately gettin interestin, can't wait to see what harry is upto next. Sev's point of view in the story is done fantastically and really interesting too :) keep up the great work, cant wait for the next update! Lyca |
![]() ![]() This is the first story written in the first person i liked(I hope the meaning is clear, had a hard time finding the right words in english). To be short: It's really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story, though I must share Snape's questions of how Harry changed so quickly. The intro to the story was very well placed, but hopefully you are planing on revealing a little more backstory. In the first chapter, the issue of the chairs at the order meeting was well played, but considering the implications (you are not one of us) you might consider making it a bit more emotional, weather that emotion is sorrow or anger. This is just a suggestion however. Overall, this is a great story, and I hope you continue with it. |
![]() ![]() Like this story. Its a diffrent one. Hope you will update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its a shame not more people have reviewed this story. I like it so far. I cant wait for the moment of clarity for Snape when he realizes what Harry really is like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Needs a little grammar tweaking - some spots read like maybe English isn't your first language? (I don't know, just guessing.) But I love the plot you've set up and I *adore* this Harry who can go toe-to-toe with Severus in a battle of words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was great. I can't wait for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. I'm glad it wasn't a one shot, I was worried until the end that it was going to be over too soon. I'm looking forward to more. |