Reviews for Unremarkable Part 1 in the Trust Series
caz1969 chapter 1 . 10/25/2010

Kate Roberts chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
WOW! this was just...WOW! very, super, incredibly HOT! I loved it :D just amazing!...WOW
Nonnie88 chapter 1 . 2/26/2010


That is one of the hottest stories I have ever read.. cheesy peeps... Im speechless!
karagrace chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Oh. My., wow, just amazing! skips off to find husband now...
moesha771968 chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
I really like all of your stories, but there is something about this one that is really special...
AnaRita69 chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
WOW! After this story I really need a cold shower... For some reason I can see Grissom and Sara "experimenting", of course out of their normal or profesional environment. Both are scientist and curious regarding human nature. Anyway, your story is excellent written and a very good description of emotions.
Sapphonest chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Oh wow. This is... just.. wow.

Awesome job.

I love how the whole experience brings them closer. It's kind of like falling in love all over again. The only thing that mattered was the other. Truly amazing.
seattlecsifan chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Okay, so I must admit femslash is not my usual cup of tea and this idea is a little OOC, but damn was that good. I think I come back to read it about once a month, because even though it is femslash and somewhat OOC it still is predominantly GSR; and damn hot, well written GSR at that.
toothchick chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
I've read & enjoyed many of your fics, so I thought that I would give this one a try ( a bit out of my comfort zone, too!)

But this was very HOT!
saraluver chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
cmfan07 chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
That was...well intense and very Hot. I haven't read any of your other stories but ofter this one, I'm going to. Very well written and I can't wait to read the rest of your stories.
DR.TEMP BONES BRENNAN chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
The Queen of Sin chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
lk\bsg;jbsfg...;lkzgbzsduh;uhg...;o\urhea\'oig...;ijrdgbv'o...hotness...;'jbzsdf...;kjbst... -dribbles- um "in my experience of threesomes..."
chiops chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
I don't quite know how to perfectly voice what I am thinking.

First of all, this story, as all of your stories, is perfectly written, and very believable - but in a OOC-way. That means for me the story is in itself very believable (because of your writing style) but it doesn't feel like Grissom and Sara to do a threesome (I just think of the comments Sara had in "Swap Meet" concerning partner-swapping).

Thanks for this unusual story!
GSRfanatic25 chapter 1 . 10/10/2007


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