Reviews for Goodbye
siromygod chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
OMG, *Sob*

Good job.
Woods' Rose chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
That was really nice. I thought you got the characters pretty much right on, and it was a beautiful piece, not too rushed, not too full of details. I think it was really nicely done, and captured the emotions of the moment and the characters quite well. Bravo!
slavetothekeyboard chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
*SNIFF* SO SAD AND BEAUTIFUL *CRIES*
Icelands chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Hm. Not amazing, but pretty darn good. Nice descriptions, good visuals. Some mistakes with punctuation though.

Keep writing!

-Icelands
Pieredae's Muse chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Awfully meloncholy, but well written! I loved the "You always follow" lines. I really can see this happening. Thanks so much for posting! take care- Req
gypsyhick chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Very good. Didn't seem ooc at all.

I love the way you captured that sense of the days when Meliara was trying to escape Galdran's search parties, thinking of nothing but getting back to Branderic, and Shevreath was desperately trying to find her first. Great job.

Wirte more!
FelSong chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
I liked it! A pity its a one shot yes? Keep writing!