|Reviews for When You're Dead|
| Vampirequeen05 chapter 3 . 7/1
Not to be picky but you have some thing wrong. Her name is Lily LUNA Potter and it is the HolyHEAD Harpies
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/27
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
I have read a few of your books and they have bad, colloquial vocabulary, too man capital letters, and no description whatsoever, so I can't imagine the scene. The storis, ones with great potential, agreeing wasted and rubbished by your writing. When you improve start writing again!
| Loyal Hufflepuff Anne chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
Hysterically funny! Just love it!
| TheSecretWeasley5147 chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
I can't stop laughing, I really can't. This is SO bloody good!
| gryffindorgal87 chapter 7 . 9/27/2008
OMG! I just found your fic and I love it! :)
| Marlicat chapter 7 . 7/30/2008
OH NOES! YOU MUST UPDATE! YOU MUST, FOR THE SAKE OF MY HAPPINESS!
| RiverMan chapter 7 . 7/13/2008
Great story.. Yeah, I can tell the emotions when u wrote this.
| CrayonsPink chapter 7 . 6/9/2008
This was awsome! I need to know how Luna died! By the way, your Rita Skeeter scene is brilliant, but you should have something like that happen to Gilderoy Lockhart(yes, I know that I probably spelt that wrong). Anyways, please update soon!
| Erorfinne chapter 7 . 6/7/2008
Luna's so cool. :P
Though I imagined her differently.
But meh. Different minds.
Anyway, I wanna find out what happens. D:
Also, MY FINALS ARE OVER! WOOT!
On another note, the story's good so far.
But since people like constructive criticism, I shall read it again and nitpick.
...Eh, I can't really find anything major.
| Rider Arya Svit-kona chapter 7 . 6/7/2008
haha it's cute. I like it. I can't wait to see what happens!
| Erorfinne chapter 6 . 6/6/2008
...Does Jamesie die in a vat of sunscreen?
Because that would be awesome.
Nah, just kidding.
| Rider Arya Svit-kona chapter 6 . 6/6/2008
haha I love that song. hehe It's an awesome grinding one. hehe It's cute. I cna't wait to see what happens!
| CrayonsPink chapter 5 . 5/9/2008
Great idea for a story! I can't wait for more, please, update ANY story, soon, I love all of them!
| Trumpetina chapter 5 . 4/11/2008
gd job, keep it up