Damn what a chapter. Nice

Damn

Nooooooo! Literally one of my all time favorites! Please finish or write another chapter. Do not give up. (Sad face)

Chapter 5 kanai to chest was the most epic touching scene, i have ever read. It was awesome, but wish there were more thinking in depth povs.

Sad, but such a great story so far. Love all the emotions and action!
Can't wait to see what happens to Naruto when he comes back home to Kohona!

it's good. Really, really good. I've read it in one take, now I have withdrawal symptoms

Love it thus far wish there was more

о.о

Wait a minute, bro I thought we aren't gonna get a romance- Well I know I should've expected that much cause of the hints and how it all played out but bruh, that left a bitter taste in my mouth... To even sleep together before he leaves? Ah yes I can already see a potential child coming aways.

Great story mate

I hope you continue
I really liked much
I hope hori gets pregnant so it’s get more exciting

Wow, this is a masterpiece. Can't wait for a new chapter. Absolutely amazing fanfiction

the whole, naruto isn't able to use chakra thing is almost worse then that fic where he went back in time and lost his memories. it's like, why?

Oh well. You've built a very good story though I don't like the end result of Naruto x Hari. I'd presume that you intended them to eventually meet and fight, and Hari would end up dead. Naruto's stay at Iwa was too long that I lost the connections with the people at Konoha. Especially since those connections was really young. Now I agree: Sandaime has gone off the deep end.

I love your flipping q&a sessions at the end of each chapter! They’re so hilarious

The stuff about supernatural things and bloodlines being from spiritual contracts is pretty off putting and out of date. Best to just delete it from the story.

Damn... it’s over but ending was good in its own way.