Reviews for An Unlikely Ally
DevilReid chapter 22 . 4/14/2008
well i like the alternate ending better i like that calim and ric get married it is sweet i would love to read the sequel hope it comes out soon.
MysticStoryteller chapter 22 . 4/9/2008
AW! That was so cute. I loved it very much. Calim should have lived. Better yet, bring her back in the sequel. PLEASE? *puppy eyes* PLEASE!

haha. Awesome story. Great job. I can't wait to read the sequel.
MysticStoryteller chapter 21 . 4/8/2008
I knew it had to be either in this chapter or in the alternate ending. Ha. I called it. I so called it. Well, this was a great story. But, how can you write a sequal to this without Calim? I think thats rather cruel...

Well, lovely story! I can't wait to read the alternate ending!
MysticStoryteller chapter 20 . 4/7/2008
I still don't believe Calim is dead. It's too tragic. Nope, I don't believe it at all. And do you know one of the reasons why? The cackle you gave me told me that she's coming back. If she had been dead, you probably would've told me straight away. thehe...

Good chapter!
MysticStoryteller chapter 19 . 4/3/2008
I STILL don't think Calim is dead. You already tried to fool me with killing off Fiyero, but I know that the chancess of Calim being dead are as likely as Glinda never wearing pink again. haha. Well maybe not that much...But, anyways, good chapter.
MysticStoryteller chapter 18 . 4/2/2008
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Okay, so I have to admit, I was going to say: I KNEW IT! about Fyiero, but I'm too upset about Calim right now. I know she's not dead, but how could you? tsk tsk.

Anyways, she'd better not be dead...
MysticStoryteller chapter 17 . 4/1/2008
This is wonderful so far. Although, I don't believe that Fiyero's dead. I just don't. Maybe I can't accept the truth but I just don't think you would kill him off that quickly. Or maybe you would...haha. Well, I suppose I'll find out!
MysticStoryteller chapter 16 . 3/30/2008
Fiyero can't be dead! Thats not allowed! Dang it..Well, I really, really love this story. It's amazing so far.
MysticStoryteller chapter 15 . 3/29/2008
Awesome chapter. Calim and Ric ar getting nice together. haha. I'm begining to like them a lot.
ape975 chapter 21 . 3/26/2008
really liked this story...prefer first ending but the second ones good too :)
MysticStoryteller chapter 14 . 3/24/2008
This was good. Lovely job. You know, I'm begining to like Ric and Calim together. They're kind of sweet. _. hhaha.
MysticStoryteller chapter 13 . 3/22/2008
Ah this ought to be good. What with the citizens of Oz at odds and Calim's father, this could get pretty interesting. Awesomeness. I love it. But what was the deal with the old lady? That confused me...
MysticStoryteller chapter 12 . 3/21/2008
Hm...this is getting intense. They'd better not get caught again. That would be upsetting. Good job!
MysticStoryteller chapter 11 . 3/20/2008
Egh! Glinda! Argh...stupid Morrible *slaps Morrible and runs away.*

Grat chapter!
MysticStoryteller chapter 10 . 3/19/2008
Ric likes Calim. It's kinda obvious.

And Elphie better not die or I'll cry.

That is all I have to say.

haha.

Great chapter!
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