|Reviews for The Rose from the Gates of Death|
| Brainiac5 chapter 6 . 9/15/2008
yay! more good stuff. Interesting insights into mithrim and Antuin. looking forward to the next update!
| Brainiac5 chapter 5 . 9/15/2008
yay! me like! you finally updated, yahoo! This story is interesting, not that I would expect anything less. keep up the good work, and don't leave me hanging for so long next time! it makes me grumpy...
| Asterisk78 chapter 6 . 9/3/2008
Ah, alas for Mithrim! Poor, confused little pessimist...
I really liked this. It's so open and honest that it's impossible not to be taken in by it. Although I'm normally not a fan of drabbling, I really enjoyed this one.
The one note I would make is that the parenthesis seem a bit...well, awkward. They seem out of character for your writing style. Just a suggestion.
| Asterisk78 chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
Oh! The suspense!
Although the dialogue was a bit vague at times...all that stuff about the Empire crumbling went right over my head...I am highly intrigued by the premise of this story. Keep up the good work!
| rehtaehwashere chapter 4 . 1/13/2008
Love your story.
| 4supernaturalgirl chapter 4 . 11/27/2007
"“This way,” the guard as pulled her sharply around a corner"
you're missing words 'said' would have helped and so would a 'he'
"The guard 'said' as 'he' pulled her" you need to watch out for this type of troublesome stuff. Love the sort of long chapter (besides that)
| Andromeda Skywalker chapter 4 . 11/12/2007
good! rite mor my itachi luving frend! . billie joe is NOT hot! how many times do i hafta say that! sheesh. Nyway, see u tomorrow!
| Brainiac5 chapter 4 . 11/5/2007
*tsk,tsk* Murtagh can't be trusted, eh? So sad... Very interesting chapter. Nice flashback. (Not whatever I called it last time.. what was it,post-shadowing?) (What can I say, I was tired) Anyway, this was another good chapter! Keep up the good work; remember the old shoe and feeling young!
| Harliq and Amsterdam chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Quote: "I think that the edges of the Rose's petals have been blackened."
Though I've only read the first chapter, what really struck me about your story is the elegant dialogue. I am very intrigued by Mithrm's character... she seems so dark. Anyone who calls death a gracefully executed art, is someone I can see eye to eye with.
Keep up the great work,
| 4supernaturalgirl chapter 3 . 10/29/2007
Still short but pretty good. A few typo's but besides that it really is a good chapter.
I like how you make it really short but it explains a lot.
Just wish you'd write longer chapters.
| Brainiac5 chapter 3 . 10/28/2007
Hmm... Very good, very good.
Once again, very good! I like the comebacks. But, I think your chapters could be a little longer. Don't worry, I understand it takes longer, and my chapters aren't very long either. But it looks so much more impressive...
Still, this is really good!
| 4supernaturalgirl chapter 2 . 10/20/2007
Its so mysterious!
Short and kinda creepy.
I like how its right to the point, please continue this story!
| rehtaehwashere chapter 2 . 10/18/2007
Like your story make chapters longer. It took less than a minute to read it slowly.
| Brainiac5 chapter 2 . 10/15/2007
Again, nice chapter. Nice post-shadowing, or whatever you call the opposite of foreshadowing... Interesting things in Mithrim's past...
I can't wait to find out more!
| 4supernaturalgirl chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
Sounds interesting. But its sort of like your taking it from 1st person to 3rd person.
Mithrim sounds intersting. Continue please!