Reviews for Shinobi Odyssey
MattKennedy chapter 5 . 1/16
OH! Rin is alive! I was wondering why she was listed as one of the romances (and with Kakashi) when she'd supposedly died. Hope you decide to continue the story sometime as it's quite enjoyable! :)
Tormound chapter 4 . 3/22/2013
I have to say, normal human black ops got nothing on ninjas, I don't think it'll be possible for NID to capture Naruto or Hinata unless they are knocked out rather quickly with tranquilizers, and even then it'll take about 2 minutes for them to actually be knocked out and that depends on how much they used. Would they even use tranquilizers since they don't know how it would affect them?
Tormound chapter 2 . 3/22/2013
Kiba and Shino going with Kakashi to the base of Akatsuki... Yeah, that cannot go wrong in anyway, not like Kiba and Shino are gonna be totally useless against S ranked ninjas, yeah not at all.
Tormound chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Why in the world would Tsunade send Sakura and Shikamaru to study the stargate. Sakura is a medic so absolutely no use in helping decipher a stargate and Shikamaru can be somewhat justifiable for being a genius.
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 2 . 3/16/2013
TBH i dont think hinata would be mad at naruto if she woke up to that...

Not that what would happen would be good cause

Hinata would first figure out whats happening, then blush and faint again, and continue to do so until the cause is no longer there, which it is due to the position they are in, ergo a circle...
Guest chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
Is it just me or is anyone else thinking madaras a Goa'uld or serves one maybe in this story one saved him at the valley and Madara joined him and he was marked so that could be why he wears a mask so they won't know his loyalty
Pwade09 chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
Well so far I really like this story with the naruhina and kakarin always felt kakashi was to alone. Is that red headed host narutos mom or just someone else either wayd be cool besides always liked those storys withhis mom alive and i like how u made the ninjas stronger than most but not unbelivibly so. well here's hoping u continue
Lerris chapter 5 . 6/30/2012
Overall this is good, although I do think your longer chapters were better. In regards to your parallel arc development, well it all makes sense and such, yet the Konoha bits remain less interesting as they are similar to canon in some ways. Oh I don't mean specific scenes, just the bit about fighting Pain, Konan, and such. Also, it just seems implausible for even Madara to have any contact beyond their world. (For that matter, if he could get technology from the stargate universe, then that might be a less convoluted way to ultimate power than the Jyubi plan.) Reintroducing Rin is an interesting bit, yet it is too early to tell where this is going. My guess is she was some kind of deep cover agent...

One other thing to note about the parallel development, is given the complexity, this kind of thing might be a little bit of a net minus, at least until things come back together. Put another way, if the entire story was already written, it might even be a net plus, but in the interim you sort of have two incomplete stories of roughly half your total length. That is not meant to discourage, but merely to point out that there are perhaps additional challenges in keeping your readers interest in this case. Still, I remain curious how this all turns out...
Lord Anubis Judge of the dead chapter 5 . 6/7/2012
yay i found this story again :) been a while since i read it and no new chapters but it is nice that i found it and LOVE it. hopefully you find inspiration to continue this story soon and decide to keep going.
puma1sunfire chapter 5 . 2/2/2012
Great chapter! Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing what you have so far of this great story.
Damix96 chapter 5 . 1/24/2012
interesting story-line
Damix96 chapter 5 . 1/24/2012
interesting story-line
Wraithrage Ragnarock chapter 5 . 11/30/2011
Wat happened with the story. You gonna keep writing
hiNAru Aburame chapter 5 . 11/18/2011

OMG! i hope you continue... soon... PLEEEEEASE! is really interesting and i like it so much..

Greetings! n_n
Spica75 chapter 5 . 10/19/2011
Oi! You leave such a good story in the middle of really nasty cliffhanger? Come on, we really NEED to see the rest of the story!
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