Reviews for My Fairytale Ending
phoebewry chapter 30 . 11/29/2017
I feel like you are rushing everything and I started to get confused as I keep on reading furthur and furthur but overall it will be a great story if you actually explain everything more clearly. However , its a good story so keep up!
tressrylla rose chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
Good storyline
tressrylla rose chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
Good storyline
jk chapter 4 . 2/21/2017
this reads so it was written by a child...its annoying and the grammar is horrible...I just cant read anymore
jk chapter 2 . 2/21/2017
soooo bella just assumed that Edward had her address to mail the book back?
and isn't it funny how shes acting like a fucking pathetic fan girl but she was all calm and collected while meeting him...not even paying attention but reading her little book. Why is she acting like a 13 year old now?
jk chapter 1 . 2/21/2017
EACH famous woman has already tried to date him? really? EVERY famous female? really? watch your wording or you'll come off like an idiot.

If Edward has done 12 movies along with everything else...lets see...each movie is like a MINIMUM of 3 months its been AT LEAST 3 years hes been famous...and he hasn't dated ANYONE? Yaaaaa I don't believe that for a fucking second.

You would have us believe that doctors from back stage came on to help the body guards and INJECTED the attacker with something...does that sound remotely legal to you? Like they would do that in front of an entire audience of people? That there wouldn't be legal ramifications for drugging someone?
bloody marry chapter 12 . 1/26/2016
25 years old
sv chapter 30 . 7/3/2015
even though u were 13 (shocked to read that ) ..u wrote quite a good story and weaved the characters well enough for a 13 yr old and didnt put in the usual crazy things most people do...keep up the good work!
Akshaya chapter 30 . 6/19/2015
It was awesome
deadliness chapter 30 . 4/13/2015
beautiful writing
deadliness chapter 12 . 4/13/2015
maybe 15, judging by how we;ll you write and some spelling mistakes, but otherwise you write like a professional
deadliness chapter 8 . 4/13/2015
wow, cool writing
deadliness chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
nice, but why mike! not that i dont like him but what about bob
Saint Katrina chapter 27 . 3/25/2015
Wow. I always hated Jacob (no offense to the Jacon-lovers) but this fan fiction (chapter 27) made me like him a teency weency bit. (Holds thumb and pointer finger a small space in between saying, "still love Edward")
WiseOldSoul chapter 8 . 12/1/2013
this is so fun...
your story is such a fantasy...
keep going...
cant wait til anna gets hers... ;)
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