Reviews for Day and Night
Obsessive Imaginings chapter 31 . 10/14
Another good chapter. Look forward to a romantic dinner
Ltlconf chapter 31 . 9/29
You've got Destine as Dustine a few times, but otherwise a great chapter. Great call on using the Pack: Hyena taking out a first class hitter so cleanly and quickly was a great way to show her skill and show the Pack in general as a real threat. Plus it was a cool scene, period!
Jack Inqu chapter 31 . 9/29
Nice reminder that the Pack are killers.

Aww, they both miss each other.

Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
ShadowCub chapter 31 . 9/29
Anna got what she deserved.
RonaldM40196867 chapter 31 . 9/29
At least Dominique is making a friend.
Fanrei chapter 31 . 9/29
Thank you for the chapter. I'm glad this fic is still alive.
Mugen-Muse chapter 30 . 6/23
Indeed. Cops like knowing the "why" when someone is trying to hide something.

Well, Alicia does make a good point.
Blackholelord chapter 30 . 6/22
How Alicia figuring out how Dominique is Demona. There are ways, one general plot idea is for Alicia to be kidnapped by enemies of Demona or her human ego, Dominique (or kidnapped for ransom money from Dominique as it becomes clear that Alicia is her lover, and there will always thugs looking for easy money). Demona is developing feelings for Alicia, and the idea of her mate/girlfriend being kidnapped would send her flying for the rescue. It needs be timed or a least dragged to the point, that Alicia witness Demona's transformation back into Dominique. Basically, lose track of time, and the transformation hits without warning (Demona will be focus on saving Alicia so much, she will not be focus on anything else).
RonaldM40196867 chapter 30 . 6/22
A nightclub better have good sodas.
Obsessive Imaginings chapter 29 . 4/22
Good to see the new chapter. Doesn't macbeth hath immortality and indestructibility too?
ShadowCub chapter 29 . 4/21
GO DEMONA! Another one will be biting the dust.
Ltlconf chapter 29 . 4/21
This is shaping up to be a massive free for all!

Like the slow burn between Demona and Alicia, though something's gotta give suddenly and soon! Just the nature of such things.
Ltlconf chapter 22 . 4/21
I actually prefer that at least some villains be competent as it makes the hero's victories all the more exciting. So well done!
Ltlconf chapter 20 . 4/21
Yes to the last, in my opinion, but have him not be aware the Illuminati are using him to clean out the NYC underworld, to make it all more orderly. Once Mace has succeeded, they get rid of him and install a syndicate the Illuminati control.
Sounds like something a secret society would do, yes?
Ltlconf chapter 17 . 4/21
Love your version of Dr Sevarius, he's the PERFECT mad scientist! You make sound like the guy who'd actually practice cackling madly in front of a mirror, just so he'd get it right!

Bluestone as well, loving your portrayal. Kudos!

Oh, and you're doing a great job on having Demona evolving in her views. Its largely driven by pragmatism, which is very plausible, and Alicia driving the emotional side of the change. Subtle and finely done.
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