Reviews for What If You Could Have Wished Me Away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story but its weird that everyone is just there looking at and listening at Draco and Hermione when they talk. Like why do they have a live audience for everything? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute, Fluffy McFluffy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this |
![]() ![]() The first part of the story was enjoyable. Unfortunately, the ‘present day’ part of the story not so much, Hermione et al., much to OOC, but many thanks anyway. |
![]() ![]() If this was your first attempt at writing fan fiction, (many years ago) I can’t wait to read your other stories. It’s very engaging and definitely stood the test of time. |
![]() ![]() I LOVE UR STORY |
![]() ![]() I cried a river for Draco |
![]() ![]() ![]() She’s kinda too weak for my liking, I know she’s only a teenager and he’s now a crush but I just expect more from her than the whole constantly crying over a boy and giving in every time he bats his eyes. Just not my cup of tea I guess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww love this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've really enjoyed this fic up to the "present" but its started to get all too OOC for all the established characterization. They go from being incredibly private about themselves and their relationship to constantly airing everything at any point no matter their audience and the lack of discretion is jarring. It's not the end of the world but IMO these point could use a fair bit of fine tuning |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good story. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for happy endings! I think overall my favourite part were the Year 7 chapters but I loved all of it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's a lot to like about this story. I enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() Gosh reading your material makes me happy beyond reason. Never stop writing. Love Aiyza |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you could write Hermione as a more stronger female. This weak willed excuse of a girl is grating on my nerves and is definitely not Hermione. |