Reviews for Happy Birthday
Spellman chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Oh, that was very well written! D I liked it a lot. _
WerWlfGrl chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
aw ok now that was fluff! aw that was an awesome chpt i loved it! hehe keep writin!
Aly chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
I really like it! You really got most of Bella down. And how do you remember these things like the audi coup Edward said he wanted to get her for her 18th b-day?

Maybe revise the spelling and capitalization. I found one possible mistake, but I'm a horrible editor (my mind automatically corrects things without me noticing).

Good story though!

Aly, Twilight/New Moon/Eclipse Fanatic. AKA youaremyworld
vampirexangels chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
you should continue this with what she gets him and alice and stuff! please dont make this a oneshot

xXxBANDxGEEKxXx chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
i really liked that
rwishka17 chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Aww, that was a such a sweet chapter! I love their kisses, and how Edward described his wants and needs. Can you please continue soon - even if you don't get 15 reviews right now? Please? :)
nomoreanymore chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
That was just so sweet! I can definitely picture that happening, it was written in exactly Stephenie's style. You should do Bella's point of view more often, it was perfect!

Great job!


Kiss Me Like You Mean It
FutureCullen22 chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
All I can say is..."Aw!"

Very cute story! Nice job!
Biana Delacroix chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
I absolutely adored that piece! Very nice romance and wonderful characterization-can't wait to read your next story!
SpotlessRose chapter 1 . 10/8/2007

that was beautiful


loved it


nobody1 chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Amazing! You really captured Edward and Bella's love for each other in a really interesting way. I loved it! Please write again soon!
vjgm chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Very sweet!
hermionejeangrangerweasley chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
the story was very cute, but please, try not to put things like 'i won't post my next story/chapter until i get X amount of reviews'. it's rude, and anoying.
sidneydee chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
I love it. EDWARD was so dreamy as usual.
angie chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
aw. I really liked it. i love the mushy stories between edward and bella. they are sso perfect for each other. anyways, it was really really good. Definitely keep writing!
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