Reviews for Divided By Two
NoToLogins chapter 26 . 8/28/2013
! Phantom thoughts! And portal made into big conspiracy.
NoToLogins chapter 27 . 8/28/2013
Didn't Jazz want to be a psychologist? Or not in this universe?
NoToLogins chapter 28 . 8/28/2013
Ohhh, I love how many disorders and quirks can be unravelled!
NoToLogins chapter 29 . 8/28/2013
Wait and wait and wait until Phantom will show. If it was longer - but much less in overall amount - chapters the wait wouldn't have been as agonising. Cruel author.
NoToLogins chapter 30 . 8/28/2013
Aww, truth time and everybody is shocked.
NoToLogins chapter 31 . 8/28/2013
Nice interview. Love how GiW appear here - in the story - while harsh and shadowy, but still not maniacal. Too many people like to overplay agencies.
NoToLogins chapter 32 . 8/28/2013
That was some mega-short chapster.
NoToLogins chapter 33 . 8/28/2013
Maybe if you change rating from M to something more mass-easily-accessible people will notice the story? I haven't noticed anything that strictly demands for M...
NoToLogins chapter 34 . 8/28/2013
Considering how good of a story it was - amount of reviews is crazily low. Really, I have read a lot of stories with half of plot this story has, and more rrs...
NoToLogins chapter 35 . 8/28/2013
You have written a great story - I really applaud you. Pity you've lost interest. Anyway ( do you even appear on ffnet anymore? ) - thank you. Was really enjoyable.
Guest chapter 24 . 5/10/2012
This reminded me of a song I used to sing. It went to the tune of Joy to the World. It was kinda morbid for a seven year old. It went, 'Joy to the world, that Barney's dead! We barbequed his head! Don't worry 'bout the body! We flushed it down the potty! And 'round and 'round it goes! And round it goes! And round and round and round it goes!' hoped you liked it! ;)
Ninjabandgeek chapter 30 . 11/28/2010
Must... Read! ... No! Must... Sleep )X
Ninjabandgeek chapter 25 . 11/27/2010
It's 2. I shoulld really get to sleep, but I only have 10 chapters left! I must say that this is truley amazing. You do not see many authors who can take anothers idea, turn it into something very different, and still have it fit well. I also thank you for rating this "M" for whatever reason that may be. I see no reason, but I always look for "M" stories when I search. If I hadent been for that odd rating I wouldve never found this amazing work.
Ninjabandgeek chapter 16 . 11/27/2010
Okaaayyyy. Okaaaaayyy. I DID NOT expect twins. I just figured separated at some point. Spazzing out here!
Echoheart chapter 35 . 5/13/2010
I'm honestly doubting that Miniol is continueing this for you. (S)he could have downloaded OpenOfficeorg to write the next chapters, but unless you decided to continue it yourself I think the story is, regrettably, over.
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