|Reviews for Without|
| RockTheVoteRTV chapter 8 . 11/11/2013
Where oh where has this gem been hiding all this time? :) I had to read some reviews before I found out it was shiznat and now im glad I did hehe
The angst and drama building up made me marathon through it all, which made me notice that all chapter ending were cliff hangers xD
Also adivce to those who complain about occness: Theres nothing wrong about occ, for example I bet they dont complain when a famous actor plays a role thats considered occ for them, so why would a story be bad if its occ?
Even though you said/implied no review necessary at the end of most chapters, im still doing one ;) cuz im a rebel
Best of luck
| S chapter 6 . 5/22/2013
The characters are completely butchered in every sense. I think im reading a storyline of completely different characters who happen to have the same name and appearance of mai hime's. And those said characters are not at all likeable
Anyway, i know your hard work to write this story but I cannot fathom this anymore, an Au may make more sense than this after carnival setting.
The ending though, is very cringe worthy.
| shiznat13 chapter 8 . 5/17/2013
well. i don't care about mai as long as SHIZNAT is back :) hahaha
| Zi-Zhuu chapter 2 . 1/6/2011
I know I shouldn't be rooting for it, but: Woohoo! Shizuru!
| scotsman chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
why is natsuki so depressed that shizuru fucking someone else a the end of chapter two when she fucks mai at the end of the first chapter. it's not like she was being any more faithful.
| Rhein rain go away chapter 2 . 6/5/2010
-MUHAHAHAHAHA- IM LOVING EVERY BIT OF IT...
ERR NOW IM STARTING TO WONDER IF IM A MASOCHIST OR WHAT
BUT REALLY LIKE IT...BUT HEY! REALLY SHIZURU SUCK THE -TUTUT-? OW EW...I ONLY CAN IMAGINE HER DOING 'THAT' TO NATSUKI BUT OW WELL...
AND I LIKE THE NATMAI...THUMBS UP
| Rhein rain go away chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
woa...THAT REALLY ROCK MY WORD..HAHAHA
MM IS THAT AFTER AN HOUR WHEN SHIZURU LEAVE THAT NATSUKI 'FUCK' MAI? WAY TO GO NATSUKI...U DOG U..HAHA
NICE LOVE IT
| Renkhal chapter 8 . 10/11/2009
This was just so tragic... But, it ended so beautifully!
I think I want to cry... but I can't...
| MelodicFlan chapter 8 . 4/13/2008
hmm I love the ending line... There's not much to say except that betas make a difference...
man without errors... (i'm going to bluntly say this)
your writing becomes tens and thousands times better...
It was a great fic... I don't think I need to say more...
I'm a woman of few words anywayz.
| MelodicFlan chapter 7 . 4/13/2008
The ending is next... Mai is probably waiting hmm... yet Shiznat is Shiznat...
I was able to totally picture that scene where Natsuki finally saw Shizuru again... everything had this hollywood style capturing in my head for no reason...
| MelodicFlan chapter 6 . 4/13/2008
Now she's back... yet they were unable to catch each other...I find that ...so sad...I mean some times i connect my experiences to the wrong things... bleh
I just hope Mai will be okay now O_O... Natsuki too... I'm just wondering how it will all end..
| MelodicFlan chapter 5 . 4/13/2008
Hmm... man this MaiNat isn't becoming a full fledged coupling like I had hope for it to be... but then again u're a shiznat fan... dammit all i must search for some mainat later lol
Okay...I really suck at reviews... Like...words just don't come out as easy anymore...
| MelodicFlan chapter 4 . 4/13/2008
I can't wait to see what happens next. Good thing that this story is complete... hmm sleep is not needed right now but i feel my eyes ...turning into slits? lol
I feel kind of sorry for erin... I wonder how Natsuki is fairing...
| MelodicFlan chapter 3 . 4/13/2008
Wow what a powerful insight in the life of Fujino Shizuru! I really love how you're able to describe emotions. I mean...I can kinda tell you're not a descriptions kind of author, and that's okay.
But...Erin... hmm, I find it sad that it's true that we need to use someone sometimes to...forget at least a miniscule fraction of our pain.
| MelodicFlan chapter 2 . 4/13/2008
K, thus begins my journey of once again reading all your stories. I'm not having a writer's block right now but I just can't seem to write..
like the ideas are there yet I refuse?
Hmm well anyways on to the review...
Which i have nothing to say about...
I mean i know there are grammar errors but who cares about that? I mean I could fix all those stories that you have but...watever I'll let you decide...
As for the story... I really wanted to see a MaiNat. I've ALWAYS wanted a nonshiznat couple. It's driving me crazy that it's always Shiznat...
So I'm looking forward to how this turns out. I can totally tell that Natsuki is having a nervous breakdown...