|Reviews for The Dark Always Comes Before The Dawn|
| Vampiredamonstefan chapter 20 . 7/23/2013
Omg love it xxx i reckon that soon Edward should come and see Bella and maybe they could have a fight or something, or maybe even kidnap her for the Voltori
| Jazzy's Seer chapter 20 . 12/22/2008
this is a good story. i like it. please update ASAP?
| Shameless-Royed-Fan1023 chapter 20 . 9/5/2008
continue please! this is so good! i love your writing!
| TueyTwoShoes chapter 20 . 6/5/2008
It's not drug, its dragged. Okay? Sorry, i get kinda OCD about those things
good story too. Read one of mine, K?
| buffy1890 chapter 20 . 4/1/2008
I really like the story. I wish i could help you with the writers block but i can't. Maybe you should try writing something else for awhile I can't wait for the update. :)
| Moonlight.Asphyxia chapter 20 . 3/27/2008
YAY! They're together! But wait... Are they going to stay together? I like it when they're together. What's happening with Edward? AH! Update!
| magicpixies chapter 20 . 3/25/2008
Hey i'm SO happy that you are still doing this story! Please keep at it! I think you should defientley bring Edward into it! PLease e-mail me when ya have updated!x
| Renanna chapter 20 . 3/24/2008
ok. i liked the chapter for the most part. it was pretty good. it makes me sad everytime i read a story and bella is letting go of edward. *tears* but they make good stories. for a while i was beginning to think that you gave up on us. then i got an email saying a new chapter. i was so excited. thank you. as for where the story should go. i dont blame you for have a writers block. i have been thinking as i read, and i think i would have a writers block at this point to. Since Bella has let go, i think you should go into thier whole relationship thing, coming with problems they have to face. maybe even them getting married and stuff. i dont know. just ideas. keep us posted. I love the story!
| ValykirieRevolution chapter 20 . 3/21/2008
I thought you died or something, you'd been away for so long, well a little revision could help. I think the cullens should be more involved in the plot, for example, someone could escape from the Volturri( I assume thats who kiddnapped the cullens). Or you could have the alsakan vamps( like what Tanya said in that one chapter) be in trouble, and Bella & co. have to find other vamps(hopefully saving the cullens along the way-give Ed a fighting chance-XD). To rescue the alaskan vamps from impending doom. btw, since I love your fic so much I became inspired to write my own twilight fic. It's kinda similer to yours-bella becomes a vamp, and Ed isn't around. anyways, I'd be happy to help ya if you get writers block
| Dimitra91 chapter 20 . 3/21/2008
Thiz story iz great. Keep writing! cant waiit 4 the nxt
| gravichick chapter 20 . 3/21/2008
The song lyrics are from chad kroger right?
| Sora1589 chapter 20 . 3/20/2008
well done I've really been enjoying this so far :D t's been a great read and I'm glad I had so much to read when I started, and I hope I'l get to read more. As far as whats next, I'd like to hear more of what's happening to the cullens again, that sounded interesting, and since 7 months have passed what have they been up to being held captive for so long? are they all still alive? What would Rosaline and Edward do something if they sai they had hurt Bella or been torturing Jasper or Emmet? where are Carlestle (sp?) and Esme? Those are some questions I have anyway, but also hearing about what's happened over the last 7 months, or why now? what's about to happen that is important with Bella and Jake?
So far your wring has been ery good, the pace has been nice, the discription and language have been good. Apart from the odd sentence or word that I can't make sence of gramatically it's been wonderful. Hope I helped some with th questions and I know how you feel, I'm stuck with my fan fiction (for the manga fruits Basket, I don't think I've posted it here yet though) I'm spending some time working out what I wanted to get from it at this point. Anyway good work and I'll be looking forward to the next chaptor (whenever they may be :D)
| theevilcookiemonster chapter 19 . 3/19/2008
wow. please continue the story!
| AnEclipseInBlack chapter 19 . 2/26/2008
I noticed that you stopped writing this a while ago, but I just want you to know that I LOVE it. It has to one of, if not, my favorite FanFic. You are an amazing writer. The way you kept everyone in character, but allowing them to change to fit their new roles is amazing. I'm going to subscribe to this fic, even if you never write for it again, because if you do continue, I can only imagine it being worth the wait.
| bellaluv chapter 19 . 2/16/2008
now i don't like jacob but
i don't hate him either. in
this story i love him and feel
bad for bella when she has to choose
again. please update you have many people
waiting for an update and i would love to read more