Reviews for These Eyes
FlamesofaPheonix chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
very interresting view of that particular plot... but i liked it! good job!
Rovianne chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
I've read some decent H/S slash and I have to say that yours comes closer than just about anything to the way something like that could actually happen.

I enjoyed that their connection and attraction wasn't explainable because, well, it wouldn't be (duh). And you've got Severus's "voice" down just perfectly, which is so very rare.
Relenita chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
What can I say?

It was a really cute one-shot... sweet, romantic and relaxed

Isn't with roses, full blossom or anything like that, but it was really cute **!

I add your story to my favorites !


Relena Sakurazuka K.

PS: em... I am from south america, sorry for my basic english XD
Arianna chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Very good oneshot. Truthfully I'd like to see how this version would progress as a series, but I'm happy with this insight to a very interesting moment. Thanks for writing it.
PhoenixThestral chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
This was very good. But the idea that Severus loved Lily and now he'll be with Harry bc Harry looks like her... idk it's a bit disturbing. I like the Snarry stories where Severus simply loves Harry... no Lily in the map.
BlissBeMine chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
Interesting point of view... I like it!
LauraChristianne chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
How nice! *_* Good writing format, though something was vague in the middle. How long were they there before they had supper?