Reviews for Princess
iRevolution chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
This is pretty good and quite well written. There weren't many errors with grammar, and none with spelling. But it didn't seem like a oneshot; more like the beginning of a story with a lot more chapters. Instead of writing a sequel, maybe you could write a new chapter.

Also, please use the Japanese names, as those are the real names for the characters.

Please update soon!

~iRevolution
angelove13 chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
hey if you dont enjoy it how can we.