Reviews for Photuris II: This Love
michelann chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Very nice
Leximaven chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Aw! This is so cute! Better than the last, if I may say so.

Ok, list of things I loved:

- River's 'shiny smile' at dinner

- Somehow I couldn't help but find the tucking in scene ADORABLE. The way he spoke to her, the tucking her in, the "Goodbye!"

- The "Goodbye!" as Jayne headed off to the river! Funny as

- Hehe the 'bawdy song' was pretty hilarious. Think of that yourself? Oh and the manly squeak!

- The shirt was a very nice thought

- Hehe loved her bad pun about bigfoot! She's pretty cute when she talks to herself

- Oh! Can't remember which story it was in, but as I've read this before I know the ending, and I liked Jayne noticing her eyes were clearer

- -giggle- "It don't try to eye-sex me while I ain't got no clothes on."

- Haha! "Put those away!" Hehe poor Jayne!
Karn chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
love it!