|Reviews for Photuris II: This Love|
| michelann chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
| Leximaven chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Aw! This is so cute! Better than the last, if I may say so.
Ok, list of things I loved:
- River's 'shiny smile' at dinner
- Somehow I couldn't help but find the tucking in scene ADORABLE. The way he spoke to her, the tucking her in, the "Goodbye!"
- The "Goodbye!" as Jayne headed off to the river! Funny as
- Hehe the 'bawdy song' was pretty hilarious. Think of that yourself? Oh and the manly squeak!
- The shirt was a very nice thought
- Hehe loved her bad pun about bigfoot! She's pretty cute when she talks to herself
- Oh! Can't remember which story it was in, but as I've read this before I know the ending, and I liked Jayne noticing her eyes were clearer
- -giggle- "It don't try to eye-sex me while I ain't got no clothes on."
- Haha! "Put those away!" Hehe poor Jayne!
| Karn chapter 1 . 10/12/2007