Reviews for LA BIENVIDA
rubber ducky review chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
hahahaha. i love it. i really like the scripted idea, it's clever. and fits perfectly with the tv show idea.

the only bad part i can think of is that cain is gay and he sexually assaulted shido. i mean i'm fine with the gay just both together is... not nice(?).

i love love love the pit. its hilarious. and the contract: awesome. plus (almost)everyone got icecream, which is beastly. icecream is amazing.

i will now read your other stories.
KieliGirl chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I think it would be funny if Riho and Shido got in a fight and you invited them on the show for a therapy session! but its just a thought...
nani20 chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
To Shido, will you turn me into a vampire? Cain, i feel it's about time youstop hitting on Shido and trying to take him back. You had your chance and you blew it. To Riho, you need more experience when hunting night breeds. For example you weren't able to find shido when he was trapped in the well with a breed, even after a few months of turning you woukld have been able to sense where he was. Why does a vampire's eyes change to gold? And why does shido have lavinder hair?