|Reviews for Beginning of My End|
| XAliceCullenJasperHaleX chapter 17 . 5/11/2009
no i don't want one of them to die! tht would b awful!
nd it depends, if they do have a baby then is bella going to go through that part whn she nearly dies? Because I find that a bit boring!
Gr8 story so far! PLEASE UPDATE SON!
| twilightfan2597 chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
| Captured.By.Insanity chapter 17 . 2/29/2008
PLEAASE UPDATE SON
| barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
cant wait to read
| marufan chapter 17 . 11/22/2007
i don't think they are ready for a kid yet they are still young well forever young in edwards case...still i think we should hold off on the kids...in my opinion n e way, either way i'd still love this story! _ and a alice/jasper sounds fine! i would love to read that one! as for the title for the sequel i think it's a perfect fit! keep it!
| abbylynn1204 chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
i love this story so far keep writing it
| vmal2010 chapter 15 . 11/2/2007
omg! i loved that plz continue i am dying to read the sequel
| ReaderRabid chapter 15 . 10/31/2007
great story! Loved it so much. Your descriptions and dialog were gerat, and I was really gripped by the storyline. I love how you handled "mature content" in a loving way without being overly graphic.
The biting while still joined was amazing.
Looking forward to the sequel!
| utfan23456 chapter 15 . 10/31/2007
aw omfg! that was so SWEET!
| lolly12 chapter 15 . 10/30/2007
Wow, I loved this story. The only oops I saw was that in the first chapter they ran to Charlie's and Edward left in his Volvo. I look forward to reading your sequel.
| Enthralled chapter 15 . 10/30/2007
Wonderful way to end it...cannot wait to see what you do for a sequel...you're very good at lemons, BTW...
| mrs.cullen22 chapter 15 . 10/30/2007
| eclipselover chapter 15 . 10/30/2007
I love this story. can't wait for the sequel
| alwaysgone chapter 12 . 10/29/2007
OMG! Great loved it. going to read the next one. Yippie! 2 chapters for me to
| Lady Kayanne chapter 14 . 10/29/2007
I like your story! No Bella/Jacob though. Icky wolf.