Reviews for The Lost Season
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
It was good keep going
Enbrethiliel chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
It has been years since you published Chapter 1. Isn't the commercial break finished yet? ;-)

A kid going to a new town and needing to make new friends is a typical AYAOTD? theme, so I could totally see this as an episode.

Some suggestions I have are that you give some clearer hints in the first scene about whose child each new member is, and also that you work the descriptions into the text (e.g. "She pushed her long brown hair over one shoulder...") instead of inserting parentheses. (Yes, I see the irony of my last sentence. LOL) Finally, the formatting of the main story could use a bit of editing. For example, when another character speaks, make a new paragraph.
Super8cary chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Wow I love it
Ifab1ndiya chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
*zombie voice* Update!
luvspashley13 chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Great story! Update soon please!
MidnightsMirror chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Not bad, I remember being in love with this show. I'm pretty bummed you haven't added anything on this since you first put it up, though.

You should continue writing it.

- Shadya
jana chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
it waz really gud... should continue writing more chapterz
jana chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
u should continue nd put more chapterz plz!

it waz really gud!
ip-chan chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
OH MY GAWD! I HAVNT SEEN THIS SHOW SINCE I WAS LIKE 7! HAH! it did exist! lol. sry. Its just I really liked this show, but it's never on anymore and almost impossible to find. Out of all the people i know nobody (but my slightly onder sister) remembers it. I kinda miss it though. :D thankas for putting it up. Its pretty good! :D
Eater of Crayons chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
write more, its good!
Atis chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
poo! chippy write more! lol its good!

*destibee chipmunko