Reviews for Treasure
DragonQuester chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
WAHA! Marcello cut off Angelo's pretty silver locks! That should have happened in the game I would have loved to see that! Awesome fanfic, ten outta ten. In the beginning I thought the treasure was goin' to be Marcello's templar ring but it ended up being a charm from his mother, great trick you pulled there.
PacWoman chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Wow, this is amazing. I can really imagine this happening in DQ8. It almost seems like a deleted scene rather then a fanfiction; like it should have happened.

Everyone was so in character and the description was wonderful. Your grammer was awesome too.
Mon chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
...Wow. Good grammer, easily put into the blank spot of Angelo's time at the Abbey. I can easily say that it's a good taste of a DQ8 Fanfic that aptly describes the hatred between Marcello and Angelo.