Reviews for Make a First Impression
Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Very cute yet sad at the same time, which is what I'm sure you were shooting for. Well written!
Vault1412 chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
This is a really nice story! I usually don't review stories that are already completed, but if they're like REALLY REALLY AWESOME then I review them A very good story, I loved how the two met with each other. Sad it was maybe? forgotten. Allen probably has forgotten it, but since Lavi has a photographic memory... Anyway! Yay for great one-shot!
TeukieWookie chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Aw, Mana was really nice and funny in this! P

Im glad sombody actually did a story where Lavi's name is diffrent.

CherrySpringer chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Great one-shot. I don't usually read them, but this one seemed interesting. I liked it, it was very cute. I think it's sort of ironic how they end up meeting again in a few years, too.

All in all, very good. P
Cross - The Damned Alchemist chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
I liked it. ~
Nebelkind chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
I feel kinda sory for Allen...

This is a nice story!
SilentKiller1 chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
poor allen, couldnt meet shama again
Hiphrol chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
Beautifully written! I loved the interaction between Rabi and Allen! And I loved how you included Rabi's alias in there as well. I don't think many others remember that important fact.