Reviews for Chase My Thoughts Away
NerdyNel chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
A wonderful piece that captures all the love and tragedy of this relationship. The emotions are pitch-perfect; "...when they fought there was nothing else in the universe" is just beautiful.

In the last line, I think you might have meant "wrack" instead of "wreck." Also, I think you meant "holds onto strong shoulders" instead of unto. Other than that, spelling/grammar virtually flawless.
swordmagess chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Absolutely stunning, haunting, and beautiful.

There's not enough of this pairing; I really hope you'll write more of them.