|Reviews for If Only|
| JRol chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
so i herd u liek mudkips
| Adriannu255 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Nicely done. It makes me feel kinda sorry for them, though. Is that bad?
| ArwenMUC chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Hey...you've been helping me with my stories and you read and reviewed mine, so I thought it was about time that I returned the favor and did the same for you.
Please do not take this the wrong way - I do want to encourage you. However, when it comes to theological stuff, I tend to be more picky, LOL. So...here goes - it almost sounds like in your story you are having Jesus and God as separate beings. I realize that the Bible often means the Father when the word God is used, but not always. Jesus and the Holy Spirit are also both identified as being God. While it is true that the Father, Jesus, and the Holy Spirit are three different persons, they are all the same God. Therefore, I found the Anti-Christ's statement to be a little inaccurate when he said that he thought that he could defeat "God and Jesus." It just makes it sound like he is not acknowledging Jesus' deity - as if Jesus is some sort of lesser creature. (Told you I'm picky when it comes to theological stuff).
I see the same sort of thing reflected in Leon's statement when he says that he says that he should have accepted "Jesus Christ and the Lord Almighty." It makes it sound like there is a distinction between Jesus Christ and the Lord Almighty.
However, in reality, Jesus Christ is the Lord Almighty in the same way that the Father is the Lord Almighty. There are not two or three Lord Almighty's. There is only one Lord Almighty, and He is the Father, Jesus, and the Holy Spirit. I know that probably sounds confusing. We can talk about this in private messages if you would like.
| Remember chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Carpathia was fairly chilled out and penitent in the book... had to wonder if the author meant for us to feel sorry for him... especialy when considering how his master showed him such contempt...
but its not odd for him to be so introspective.
I was a bit suprised in the sequel their still capable of comprehensible speach a millenia latter.
given all the torment their in.
| Guy With 1000 Names chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Not the first time I read this fic, but the only time where I nearly cried; so many lost souls...
Anyways keep it up.
| Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
| Garnet Sky chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Eyes wide open and mouth gaping. Stunned speechless.
| L-Syllabub chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
"Who knows? I guess it’s too late to dwell on this.”
Um...wouldn't Nicolae be a bit more upset over the whole eternal lake of fire thing? He seems pretty chilled out.