|Reviews for Noon|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
| krotoxo chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
I loved this story!
| Pyro of the Sea chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Dr. Pepper or Mug Rootbeer all the way! But between the two I would pick coke cute story its nice that Billy would want to look after everyone like that
| umhowaboutno chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Very good! I loved how you organized a schedule for them. I love the HIVE 5, they're all adorable. Billy makes me laugh too, which was why I looked up some stories about him. So glad to have stumbled across this. :)
PS, a good translator is
| Sir princess laughs a lot chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
| xXkatlagXx chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
"Who knew someone who can't even talk be so darn pushy!" Best quote in this chapter. I loved this story, it's so sweet to think of the team as a family! Great story! _
| Pokegirl5000 chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
| crazyarsonist chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
This may have been written 3 years ago, but I still think it's very nicely done. Great job with the HIVE's characterization, especially since there aren't a lot of HIVE-centered stories around here. Thanks for posting.
| xxXAngel of InsanityXxx chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
I love the Hive more than the Titans. But I still love them both
| Little Miss Juliet chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Yeah, I'm readin' these backwards. XD Billy Numerous huh? I never paid attention to the H.I.V.E. Five unless I was doing something KFJinx-y.
| Firefly4000 chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
wonderful job:) Loved the intereaction more please
| CampionSayn chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
This is a masterpiece! It's so hard to find anything that shows the FIVE'S good side and this portrayed Billy so well!
| mistressmarionette chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
SOMEBODY ELSE LOVES BILLY NUMEROUS! Oh, you've made my heart sing this night. I"m a HUGE HIVE fan (insert lame self-advertisment here: check out my stuff, Jinxed For Life, yadda yadda). Thank you, thank you, thank you for not making them morons. Thank you for treating them like people with brains. Thank you for not focusing on Jinx. Thank you for making Billy believable. Thank you for utilizing Kyd Wykkyd. WRITE MORE. THIS PLACE IS DIGUSTINGLY LACKING IN HIVE FICTION.
Yours in writing,
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
This was good, seriously. I like HIVE's stories, especially good ones like yours.
As for Spanish translations... I'm Mexican, so, you can send me anything you need for Mas and Menos' speech.
Keep the good writing.
| Comicbookfan chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
I loved this! I also speak spanish fluently, if you need help with translations...look on my profile thingy and send me an email. By the way, I would like some payment. AS IN HELP ME! I HAVE NO IDEA HOW TO ADD CHAPTERS TO MY STORY!