Reviews for Turn into Something Beautiful
Alexandra Valensi chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Adorable, just the kind of one-shot story one needs to brighten up the not-so-adorable day. Although at some points I felt a tiny bit confused (I really can't see Luna as friends-with-benefits kind of girl, but maybe it's just me), but the delightful meemaw and Pansy's messed up manicure more than make up for it ;)
LeVaire chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Lol, what an unexpected and unconventional pair. But really cute story! :D
squishypinapples chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
heheheheh, nice :) haha, definately like the ending, great one shot :D pairing is pretty cool, i must say :) good choice.
lybhing chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Incredibly cute. _ Love the whole scene 'tween them couple. :]

Lyia.
Livia F chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Hahahaha, poor Dean, huh? :D

He was socute, helping her and all... I've grown attached to Pansy after reading some fics about her - she's not THAT bad as people tend to think.

And she with Dean? Hot. (;

Great story!
Sir Stud Muffin chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
mucho cuteness!
QueenoftheClumsyDorks chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
THis is great. I'd love to see a one shot of them telling everybody about them. Are you planning on putting up pictures? Can't wait for more story updates.
Visible chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
I LOVE this pairing, but the story was a bit quick and fast paced, don't you think? I loved Dean's 'meemaw' because she was hysterical! The cultural differences between Pansy and Dean were very profound too, that also includes the differences with how you described Americans and Brits. It was a great story and I hope you write more about Dean and Pansy together!

-Lylian
sm chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Interesting story! I really liked this non-typical pairing!
MorgansBabyGrl chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
WOW! That was awesme! If that was the challenge then you did a goosd job! I look forward to reading more of your work!
Irish Whiskey chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
never read a DeanPansy before. i officially love it. :)
Savannahbobanna chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I must say, I'm excited for this one.

1) You have me laughing right off the bat! Hahaha Dean... braded hair... AHAHAHAHAAHA! Carlisle great name :D

2) meemaw! XD holy crap hahahaha! I have a feeling I'm going to like this story. Fancy pants british talk... ahahaha

3) Dean-bean? AHAHA! I love it! And I'm only a few words into it. This is going to be quite the long review. :D

4) friends with benefits? Rats :)

5) PANSY? AH! *runs and hides*

6) I like the idea of being with a pure-blooded prince too xD

7) Damn that beating... messing up her manicure. ;D

8) I'm just WAITING for meemaw to walk in lol

9) Ahahahaha! Penis reduction surgery xD

Hahahaha! I don't think I quit laughing that entire time. A :D
kazfeist chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
I think you admirably fulfilled the challenge terms. :D
Koukla22 chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
OH MY GOD! I abandoned my packing for a few hours and came home to this! Yay!

This was great! I definitely did not expect you to pick Pansy... but I LOVED it.

Personally, I think you should have written all of Dean's scenes in the HP books because you write him SO much better than even JKR. Who knew Dean was so smoldering. Wow.

I loved the way you described how Pansy grew into her pug-face. The slightly upturned nose and gray eyes... beautiful. Really, really vivid and lovely.

You fit all of the quotations and phrases in seamlessly.

I am so glad you went with the cornrows... I have a very nice image in my head of a cornrowed Dean and let me tell you... IT'S HOT!

The mounting attraction between Pansy and Dean was great too.

"Dean looked back at the book, fooling nobody. He was just as attracted to her as she was to him…"

- This was my absolute favorite line of the entire thing. It speaks volumes about the tension and ... I don't even know what else to say... I just adored this line.

The Dean and Luna part was great too. It fit so nicely into the story and I loved that you wove in all of the bits from Deathly Hallows as well.

FANTASTIC JOB! You are the challenge master!

I loved it :) I will have to give you another soon!
PinkTribeChick chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
OMG - that was hillarious . . . and strangely enough quite a fun pairing to read about. You did a great job!