|Reviews for Jaded|
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/7
Oh god,at chapter 9 I readed "I will not screw this,Sandwich,I promise."
I have tears in my eyes.
But anyway,good story. ( / V ) / •
| Mallory83 chapter 25 . 1/28
I just showed my girl status on this chapter and cried...my husband shook his head at me and went back to ESPN...sniff thanks
| firesprite07 chapter 43 . 7/10/2013
loved this story wonderful read
| Windblown Wallflower chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
like it so far. I totally feel for you on the grammar. I'm a native speaker and I still get complaints about how much my english sucks. though to be fair english grammar differs slightly depending on,where you learned it.
| AquaRias chapter 2 . 3/11/2013
Just noticed a few things with name spelling/pronounciation. I'll give two examples, If the name Jaime was spelt how you spell it it would be pronounced "Jame" (Like James without the 's'), and I am assuming you meant for it to be Jame-y which would need to be spelt 'Jamie'. Similarly you spell Lily's last name as 'Evens' which would be pronounced "even-s" (Like the word 'even' with an 's' on the end.) To pronounce it correctly as it is in the book it is spelt 'Evans'.
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 36 . 2/23/2013
Erm, Mood Plants?
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
You had to give Draco my hair and eyes, didn't you?
| CheyRain chapter 43 . 2/23/2013
I absolutely love this story and would love a sequel about Sirius falling in love and Ron coming back. Though a good story about George finding a guy or about Bill finding someone would be awesome. I always pictured Bill with Fleur, George with Angelina, Fred a gay slut, and Charlie with a bear animagus in America. Percy definately comes across as a bi mama's boy. I want to learn more about Aaron. All we get is a name and the fact he's a werewolf. Any physical description would be great. I want to at least see a one-shot of Sirius seeing James and Lily. What about the wedding? When did Harry become such a good friend with Seamus? What happened to Dean? I kinda picture him with Seamus actually...That would be a great story. Can you do a one-shot of when Lily told James about the real Jamie? Have you put anything new already? I don't know yet because I haven't gone through your list yet. In fact it's taken me three days just to read this story because I'm on a borrowed computer for short periods of time. Gotta love insomnia though otherwise it would've taken me longer. I seriously couldn't sleep until I finished this story. Speaking of seriously, I have a dog named Sirius who was "named after the dog-star" and "not" the "weird maniac who died." :D
P.S. Please pm me back to discuss some of these ideas...I kinda want to write a fanfiction based on your fanfiction. It took me six tries to sign in just to send you a message you can reply to.
| Jacky Writer chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
I just wanted to say I read this fanfic on Adult fanfic...and I probably read this like hundreds of times! I am in love with this fanfic! I especially go straight to chapter 10 whenever I feel like crying! I really love it!
I'm sorry I never wrote a review for like the past 3 years but when I saw this here on fanfic...I just knew I had to write one and tell you how much I love this story!
Lol I am quiet repetitive.
| Butterfly1993 chapter 43 . 10/24/2012
Brillant xD couldnt stop reading hence the 3.34am review lmao :3 was sad to see it end but oh well onto the next one xxxxx
| Salinia chapter 43 . 9/20/2012
| wwemoon12 chapter 7 . 9/8/2012
did you know they have tales of beetle the bard i have the book
| Jason Clarkson chapter 42 . 8/17/2012
You wrote: "For Summery, warnings, spoilers and disclaimers see chapter one" but you didn't give any kind of 'warning' for the story; I wouldn't normal say anything but I think that all M-rated stories need to carry a warning as to why they're rated M, whether for something hardcore like graphic sex or something fairly minor like language the reader deserves to know what they're getting in to.
| MargaritaS chapter 43 . 7/13/2012
interesting indeed, i really liked how you decided to end it, overall a very entertaining read :)
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 42 . 6/30/2012
YES! YES! YES!
SIRIUS IS BACK!
(does happy dance around bedroom)