Solo que Harry no sea pareja con Ginny

I really like what you've done with Voldemort training Dudley into being a host for him, it's something I've never seen before and is a really fun-to-read consequence of getting the Dursley's arrested. If you ever decide to update this again, I think that having 0-2 more worlds after this and then going back to world 1 would be best. I know you said you have 5 planned out somewhat, but maybe you can combine those ideas? I know you don't like writing a good Dumbledore, so I'm happy to see you broadening your horizons. No need to fall into the cliches of evil Dumbledores.

This Duddly just asking for an agonizing death. Dont understand how and why Tom wouldve or couldve shown up at that orphanage. Rly dont get why they wouldnt just grab Peter from the start instead of stupidly waiting three years for no reason.

This should cause an alternate timeline leaving that Harry and Voldy free to do as they please without even a Dumbledore to rely on.

5th year 15 year old minus 15 years equals 4 years old?

Dumbles is a lot older than Minerva.. I'm not sure ahes even supposed to look as old as the actress does in the movies. I know Petunia certainly doesnt.

I'd they can make an amulet to world hop I'd imagine Zippy could give him one with a link specifically to Rose's world to come back to.

Neville too.

So this version of Sirius actually got a trial but it was a joke of one. How could Albus cover himself when Sirius pushed for the Potter will to be unsealed which would out him?

Theres no chance in hell the goblin or anyone else would just let an attempt to tamper with their mind go like that with a warning.

So why leave the elf to a miserable end? Why not like before with Ginny fling Peter at the ministry. Wait till theres a session and drop his ass in the middle of it so it cant be covered up. Maybe make sure a note is dropped to Amelia just before so she acts before anyone else. Better yet Peter is already dosed on truth serum.

This was needless cruelty.

Not getting why Harry didnt just show up as himself to help Harry the elf. Why did he end up possessing like a ghost and taking over the life of the house elf in his place. Living such a miserable life for no reason.

Part of him was disturbed by the youngest Weasley more than any other of his friends. It was almost when he met a fangirl Ginny, he could feel that something deep down was wrong or missing.

Come on...

Hermione having nothing to say about Ron spouting off and insulting Harry like that just has me pissed off at the author. I call bs that would be her reaction or lack of reaction to that garbage.

Ron brave. Was dragged to the Troll by Harry and hung back. Snake he was too wound up by his sister and too dumb to know better. That last bit applies to Harry more than the being wound up.

3rd year Ron did fuck all. 4th year was all Harry with aron turning on him.

What's with this handsome, tall, and brave crap?

Makes no kinda sense for Hermione to be attracted to Ron. Even Rowling said that was a mistake and bad call.

That Hermione and Ron were annoying parodies of themselves.