Um, Kretcher? Nothing against you specifically, but it amazes me how much Kreacher's name gets messed up all of fanfiction. There's Kreature, Creature, Creacher, Kracher, Krecher, and all sorts of other mixups, and it's a little sad how difficult people seem to find it to get his name right.

I just thought of something, as years pass for Harry in dimensions isn't he aging? Also, if time in his world going by as he lives in other dimensions or is it slowly, and much more complex?

Interesting. I wish there were more (though it needs a bit of spelling clean-up here and there).

"A girl - how undignified"

Check the sexism.

"as much as insulted by his twin's mimicry of the culture." Well, yeah, calling Riddle an Eta [filth] is...while, in some vague sense, appropriate as the "unperson" caste usually referred to politely now as [i]burakumin[/i] were those who dealt with death and dead things... so yeah.

Chapter 15: Cleaning the glasses with the invisibilty cloak removes the enchantment that allows them to see through invisibility cloaks.

This particular detail is really brilliant and imaginative. It keeps the magic feeling magical. I like it a lot.

Someone kill that snake already! And what would the Dursleys say, after finding out their own son is a wizard?

Oh god. I feel like i'm turning green. Dudley is awful.

Tom! Hello!~

Since she said it she is right.*Nods sagely.*

When a Harry goes to Tom it is so damn weird.

He took a good Ginny. I love it.

Masahiko is so stupid! I do hate Ginny being like that, she would be much better at school.

Ginny is such a bitch. And that Snape scares me. Good job with the twins, I love them.

That was a brilliant

A very marvelous will

Poor Remus.