Reviews for Fever
JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I liked this, a lot. Your writing is good, especially when it came to the vague mystery and the couple's longing. The last scene was funny. I hope you keep writing!
scooter chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
zutarababe chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
i dont get it... then again i am clueless xD but seriously i dont get it... is it cuz she's blushing?...
zutaralives chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
NO! not corny at all! i loved it, and aang was great at the end.
AniuLonewolf chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
definately didn't stink of rotten penguin meat... i really liked it (firm supporter of Zutara here).. way better than many others i had read... awesome job!
musicbender chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Reading this made my face go hot and wish I was with my boyfriend! I guess it was sexy; Kinda corny, but sexy all the same.
WriterforLife29 chapter 1 . 10/13/2007

AvatarKiba1001 chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Don't sell yourself short; this was good. I think, though, you could've used their disguises of the Blue Spirit and Painted Lady.
TheStupidGenius chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
OMG! I really loved the story; short but really, really sweet. Hope you write more stories like this, ffnet could use more beautiful stories. Good luck! -.:TSG:.
actafoo chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
lol. it was corny, but good corny. aang was totaly oblivious. he was like 'what?' lol. luved it!