Reviews for Hierarchy
Saij Spellhart chapter 2 . 4/9/2017
I know this story is like a decade old, but since Ichigo is all about Shakespeare I'd think he would've used the name of a Shakespeare character. Like maybe Romeo. Especially since he was being so cheesy at the ball.

Also in Romeo and Juliet, Romeo meets the girl at a masquerade ball. He sneaks in hoping to crash it with some friends and ends up meeting Juliet and gets infatuated with her. And doesn't realize she is his sworn enemy. Because their families are feuding and what not. I think it would've been far more fitting to reference that instead of Cinderella.

That aside, I'm enjoying the story. My biggest issue is that you have more than one character speaking in the same paragraph. Which is a big writing no no. But I'm trying to overlook it because I like your premise so much.
crystal789 chapter 28 . 4/1/2017
Thank you for this wonderful story:)
EliteOtaku111 chapter 12 . 2/26/2017
Good chapter Keep going. Also, since youre a fan of Bleach, please vote on my pool about my Bleach Fanfic, The Better Villains.
Exclusively ByaRuki chapter 1 . 1/22/2017
I love this AU of Ichiruki :)
Guest chapter 28 . 11/19/2016
Thank you writing this. I loved it so much! This is probably one of the best Ichiruki fanfics I've ever read.
Guest chapter 28 . 5/4/2016
Lmao I laughed a lot with this story. Rate 10/10
EliteOtaku111 chapter 11 . 12/23/2015
This is so exiting!
EliteOtaku111 chapter 10 . 12/23/2015
This is so good! XD
EliteOtaku111 chapter 9 . 12/23/2015
Things are getting extreme!
EliteOtaku111 chapter 8 . 12/22/2015
Very good chapter! Keep going!
EliteOtaku111 chapter 7 . 12/22/2015
This chapter is great!
EliteOtaku111 chapter 6 . 12/22/2015
I. Freaking. Love. This!
EliteOtaku111 chapter 5 . 12/22/2015
I love this story! I love Ichiruki too!
EliteOtaku111 chapter 4 . 12/22/2015
Such a great chapter!
EliteOtaku111 chapter 3 . 12/22/2015
I like this XD
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