Reviews for Hierarchy
Feathered Heart chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
Very good! I enjoyed reading this. lol..Poor Renji. Snubbed. :p Please update as soon as you can. _
decemberWriter chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
Wow, creative plot. I love it! XD Can't wait for the IchiRuki to start showing itself - it'll be interesting to see, especially since Rukia currently seems to hate his guts. . I'll be waiting for the next update!

~ Del
Hearii chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
Woo! Ya! Ball! Partay! XDD

Only suggestion is to work on who's talking at what times - it get's a tad confusing.

e.g.

Take something like this...

“Fine, I don’t like you.” Renji laughed a little, and sighed. “You’re hopeless you know?” Rukia smiled. “I’m not hopeless, just not interested.” Renji didn’t laugh, and Rukia finally made her move to walk out the exit door.

And divide it into who's speaking, like this...

“Fine, I don’t like you.” Renji laughed a little, and sighed.

“You’re hopeless you know?”

Rukia smiled. “I’m not hopeless, just not interested.” Renji didn’t laugh, and Rukia finally made her move to walk out the exit door.
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