Reviews for dandelion
LogicalDaydreamer chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
It was a good story, but alot of people are less likely to read it if it's not punctuated properly. It's an eyesore to look at a story with no capitals, and people generally will associate that with immaturity, which is associated with bad writing.

They'd be wrong. The writing is very good, and the story is beautiful. In order for everybody to get that message, take the extra few seconds to punctuate.
Curley-Q chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
dcrendi chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
this was lovely.
RotishaElizabethKate chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
It's a really could fanfic. You are really good writer, but perhaps you could captialize names and the beginning of sentences. Everything else was really great!