Reviews for Brothers
itisfinished12062015 chapter 5 . 7/12/2014
I 've been enjoying this story so far. I got a reccommendation for a story where Sam and Dean were raised apart. Anyway my favorite paragraph from this chapter was this one because as you read Sam's expression, a messy confrontation scene is inevitable. Good job building the tension and creating a visual scene.

Bobbylooked out his window when the familiar soundof Dean's Impala reached his ears. He watched both boys as theygot out of the car, wondering if they had figured it out. He watched Dean for a second, and figuredhe hadn't. If he had, Bobbyknew, Dean would probably be pretty pissed off right now. Then his eyes landed on Sam, and he sighed. Sampractically jumped fromthe Impala as soon as it was parked. There was an angryand determinedlook on Sam's face. So, one of them had figured it out. Bobby opened his door.

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Rain of the Forest chapter 12 . 8/1/2013
Rain of the Forest chapter 11 . 8/1/2013
Awww! That last bit was adorable!
Rain of the Forest chapter 10 . 8/1/2013
God... I sure wouldn't waist my time calling and then waiting, I would call, and THEN go in..
Rain of the Forest chapter 9 . 8/1/2013
Awwwww! FINALLY!
Rain of the Forest chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
Okay, so he DOESN'T know...
Rain of the Forest chapter 3 . 8/1/2013
Hey, does Dean know that's his baby brother?
Sungaya chapter 12 . 2/18/2013
I just found and read this story and I think it's really brilliant!
I felt with Dean and even cried when he ran away after finding out about Sam...
It's a great story and I think it's also written very good.
And the ending is quite good - Sam risking his life for Dean might make Dean aware of the fact that he actually is important, too and it lets the reader be sure that Sam and Dean are going to solve the problems to come and Boby will help them...
All in all a wonderful story!
SaSc11 chapter 12 . 1/17/2011
I love ur story. i know its been a while but im hoping u will go over the story lines again and reread the chapter to start updating again. It is really really good. i want to know how the boys patch their relationship back up. osm
Arilaen chapter 12 . 6/3/2010
Yay! Poor depressed Dean though ( Love your writing! D
cold kagome chapter 12 . 5/20/2010
wow.. . poor dean... but will dean will be happy that sammy is with him now?
SamDeanLove chapter 12 . 5/2/2010
Ah! more..more..please hurry up!
jensengirl4eva chapter 12 . 8/1/2009
Great story. From start to finish...
mcgirl chapter 12 . 1/13/2009
please continue this is really good
Zafiro Okami chapter 12 . 4/15/2008
. aw!
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