Reviews for Brother and Sister
planet p chapter 2 . 8/26/2010
So there are some answers. Do you think they were a little too mechanical, though? Anyway, it was interesting. I'm amazed Adam didn't say something to Jarod about helping people all the time when the one time Emily helps some people it brings trouble knocking on their doorstep.
planet p chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Is Adam's surname significant? He's amazingly understanding, though, or maybe he trusts that Emily will tell him the full truth when it is safe to do so, but knows that to hold up their leaving won't get him anything but all of them in a bad situation which they'll have been glad to have avoided if he hadn't been so insitent with having answers right away.
anamcharalove chapter 2 . 10/15/2007
I liked it except you didn't explain how they felt and it had no emotion. Just one scene to the next.
Katescats chapter 2 . 10/14/2007

I just read your story it was good.