|Reviews for Dystopia|
| berryban chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
LOL. You should make a story out of this XD Lmaooo!
Awesome though :D
| Kage Kui chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
sounds like it can be made into a coolchapter story cool but probably short
| Your Average Sardonist chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
this made me lol_
The only negative thing was, well, that it was too...short.
But otherwise wonderful! I wish I could write like you do
| kljjlkjlkj chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
| kamooi chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
This is great! You should expand this world! It would make a frickin' hilarious series. _ Yup. Frickin' hilarious.
| oztan chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Way to funny. Neji and Sasuke I like it.
| Anon chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
Cute, but it doesn't seem like something that functions well as a oneshot. Admittedly, I'm not sure what more could be added but it seems like it could at least be fleshed out by a couple of hundred more words.
| lost in details chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Really cool to meet another Melanie. XD My name is Melanie as well. Anyways...This story had me laughing for a while...and then thinking...I could actually picture everyone like that...except for maybe Hinata being bold...
| narutardedbandgeek chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
hey buddy! i'm finally back on the fanfiction community.
this is pretty awesoem! **haha you totally got this from english class** its proof of how boring algebra is, gr.
like always, minor typos and grammatical issues but its hardly noticeable.
keep writing buddy!
| xxBroken21xx chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Hilarious. I really liked it! -
| Heart Reaper chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Shy and Naruto sounds like a good mix.
I take it Ino was the Sasuke of her vision. D