Reviews for Shinji's Had Enough
RyoshiMorino chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Personally, Shinji it's about damn time! Lol, Wheeljack 69, I liked the story and the rough elements of the lemon, your right about that, lost o' people like it rough, and I always figured Asuka would be one of them.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Not too bad. Actually, it's a pretty good attempt. Its not like those other stories wherein they take it far too extreme. Shinji even let go of Asuka's hands. Since she didn't resist, it was pretty much mutual and it wasn't like trolling Asuka fans in anyway, like some other stories of Shinji growing up a spine do.
Alpha Taco chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Thou art hurting thy head. Good story...?
Scarabeye3000 chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
A bit... rough.
CrazyBloodMoon chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
true, rape is a horible thing, but is it really rape if the other person wants it and just wont ask for it? well, over all, only a few minor spelling mistakes (missing a letter here and there) gramar is all good, wording is good, and the story line, very beleivable, heh, i always wondered what shinji would do if he snapped.
SunniDanni chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Here's the story to satisfy the perv in me.

It was an interesting read, just... not graphic enough. And not long enough.

I guess I"m a bigger perv than even I thought I could be.

But I enjoy the WAY you write.
94saturn chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
Well let’s see…you have Asuka and Shinji 19 years old so they’re old enough to get married without permission in Japan. Asuka was obviously teasing Shinji for months trying to get a reaction out of him. Perhaps she got more than she bargained for but she got what she wanted; a stronger willed Shinji. A second chapter could have the two go on a date and end up apologizing to each other.

I wish that people who don’t know their behind from a hole in the ground about Japanese culture would stop pinning western ideas of morality on them. The story is rated M so people reading it should expect some strong content. It is a strong subject but a legitimate one. Like it or not there is a concept known as Free Speech. If you don’t like to read this kind of story use the back button and keep your mouth shut. The rules say that it can’t be ‘explicit’; which means that, as long, as it is tastefully written and rated M, it is acceptable. You have to manually select the M rated stories. You don’t HAVE to read them if you don’t want to.

Considering that this story was his first attempt at posting here, I think he deserves the benefit of a learning curve. Honestly it is time for some people to grow up.

If someone doesn’t like my words don’t take it out on this author. If you look to the left I’m easy to find and I’m happy to discuss the subject in a rational adult manner.

Great story man!

Dale (AKA 94saturn)
WebKnight chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Just wanted to say that that was a pretty good story. Pretty well written to, although there were a couple of grammical errors that I would have done different.

I'd like to find out what broke SxH appart. Wouldn't mind seeing where SxA end up after this.

The hentai was pretty good, but to short and not "graphic" enough. I don't wan't blow by blow, but...well you know what I mean.
Hijokugei chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
O O

O! OMG!... It's COOL!
katyn1 chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Rape in Japan is like saying hello!
Supercat chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Umm... I don't think you have a very good understanding of what rape is... A little disturbing, frankly. And, for your information, a woman can climax even if she doesn't enjoy it. Part of the potential psychological horror, you could say.

As for the rest, well, yeah, not allowed on this site, etc, etc. Seriously, just go to adultfanfiction . net
Fifth Horseman chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
I have to agree with Shir0 Tenshi, and I will also add that lemons are not permitted. Read the site guidelines before you post.
KAZEONI chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Not bad I like stories where Shinji finally snaps and dose Asuka. You should continue this story I think its cool. If you need a proof reader Let me know and I will be more then Happy to proof read any Eva stories you have.

(To Asuka: Paybacks a bitch ain't it.)
Shir0 Tenshi chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
You have got to be kidding me... Sigh. Well, first things first.

As a writer you have potencial. As a story, this is crap. There have been a few more authors that insist on posting purely lemon fanfics and most of them got burned for it. A lemon is, at best, used to advance 2 characters relationship while already inside the main story arch. A fanfic should NEVER be just a lemon because than it turns into a porn-fic. Made from someones stupid fantasies just to turn people on. Its pointless and stupid.

Having a story, and a few chapters in having a lemon can serve to advance that story, but its gotta be very carefully done.

If you want my advice, take this crap off the internet and build a story around it that leads to this.

Another thing is that its too grafic. As it is i'm reporting your story.

Good luck next time.