|Reviews for The Difficulties of Avoidance|
| inactiveaccount100000 chapter 12 . 12/5/2010
Forbearance lol. I liked how this chapter went. Riddle and Ginny having wild mood swings... well at least when they arn't near each other. When there with each other they seem to share in equal parts loathing and hate. Maybe it's love
Rita Skeeter that evil witch! She ruinded a completly beautiful sappy scene and turned it into a book to sort of makes me happy but she also strangly annoys me along with Ginny. That whole week or so wher they were fighting I was all for team Ginny( although I felt guilty along with her for making fun of Luna) which is uncommon for me because most of the time it doesnt matter what Luna does I still like her. I think that goes to show how good you are at writing from Ginny's view point and getting Ginnys feelings out onto paper. In this scene I was understood exactly where she was coming from too and I got where Tom was too.. yay.
if I wasnt so sad for ginny I would have laughed my head off about the house elf thing.
Oddly I like Harper! u should throw him into more scenes! he's so funny
| Recipe chapter 12 . 12/5/2010
So I'm guessing she screwed up on the be-nice-to-Riddle plan. xDDD
I like this chapter, especially when Ginny mocks Tom back with the diary-orphanage-quote. Wasn't expecting that.
Good luck on your finals, but please please please update soon!
| ExilEden chapter 12 . 12/5/2010
It would seem right that Riddle would be calm and composed in the middle of a heated argument until he gets called a half-blood or someone mentions his less than glorious parentage. Aside from labeling Ginny as a blood traitor and a silly, naive, emotional girl, I don't really see Tom sinking to that low, childish level of name-calling, being seventeen as he is. I think it's only when his secret 'nerves' are struck that he gets nasty and throws a hissy fit, but being the way Riddle is, he would prey on someone's weak, sore spots to break them down. So I think you did a good job with that part when you made him pluck at Ginny and Harry's break up and her hurt feelings.
I think a little more description wouldn't hurt, especially in fight scenes like that. Gives it more meat, you know?
Anyways, great chapter. Revising it might not be a bad idea, but I don't see anything major that needs to be taken out. Just more polishing and elaborate on what's already written and it would shine like the past chapters.
Also, so far we seem to be only getting one side of the story about Tom's frustrations. I think it would be interesting if you wrote something from Tom's pov, or from inside his "mind", you know, a glimpse of what's behind those dark eyes? Just a suggestion if you ever run out of ideas.
| ExilEden chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
Wait, ignore that last review if you will. I was thinking of the wrong story. The T/G story that I was actually writing about is called 'Ghost of a Memory' by Giliath. THAT one has a more accurate depiction of Tom and Ginny. The other one was...kind of a humorous version. Either way, since Tom/Ginny fanfics are so hard to find, I just thought I'd recommend a good one to you.
| ExilEden chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
This is a totally random review, but after reading your bio about how you like to read T/G stories, you might be interested in this story "Crimson Ink" by Rhianna. It's not finished, but it's one of the T/G stories out there where both Tom and Ginny are written within the boundaries of plausible characterization.
| Elspethe chapter 11 . 12/2/2010
I'm really enjoying this story. The characterization seems to be very accurate, and it has it's moments of sheer hilarity (dance the can can) and excitement. Looking forward to the next installment!
| Intricacy chapter 11 . 12/1/2010
Too lazy to log in again :3
I SENSE A TURNING POINT IN THE STORY. I love how quickly your update came. Hopefully an encore will appear tomorrow? ;3
| ExilEden chapter 11 . 12/1/2010
Tom and Ginny clearly aren't off to a good start on their friendship, but I'm sure you'll be able to overcome the challenge of the enemies slowly learning to trust one another without having them crossing the line into OOC-land. Now that Ginny is single again, I wonder how Riddle will capitalize on this? Will he taunt her and try to manipulate her feelings? He is nothing if not cunning and resourceful.
I admit, Luna seemed just a weensy bit OOC here, being so objective and direct when it's more like a Ginny-ish way to be, but since there is certainly no love lost between the redhead and her tormentor, and no one else knows about what they've been doing with Riddle, I understand the necessity behind breaking the IC mold a little bit.
Overall, splendid chapter! I wish you good luck on your finals! I have them in two weeks as well. Eagerly anticipating chapter 12 (hopefully more Tom/Ginny interactions! Hinthint;)
| KiloP chapter 11 . 12/1/2010
I really like your writing style and the pacing of this story. I'm excited to see how Ginny deals with Tom Riddle now that the situation calls for her to be a bit more diplomatic. Please update as soon as you can.
| ItsUpToYou chapter 11 . 12/1/2010
yes, that was a fast update. I like that. I enjoyed the chapter, though there wasn't much Ginny/Tom in it. but hey, I can wait ;)
It was fun reading Tom's reaction to having been locked away in that passage way. He was pretty angry wasn't he? XD Though, it was kinda understandable too. I think Luna was right. They didn't treat him very well since he's arrived in the future. Poor guy probably has no idea what's going on. If he wasn't Voldemort I would almost have pity on him.
Looking forward to read more awesome stuff.
| inactiveaccount100000 chapter 11 . 12/1/2010
Wow, this was a great chapter, great two chapters from what I've just read. I have no idea how Ginny and Luna are going to recruit Tom Riddle though. Not this far in the game, I mean what will they say? "Hey sorry for hexing u all those times before but will you be a good boy and not go evil on us?"
yup, I can see that going well :)
Arrg Harry dumped Ginny. Again. That was tough enough to deal with in the book! !
| ms Masen chapter 11 . 12/1/2010
awesome:D another chapter in so short time! finally harry is out of the picture and tom's got free rein! looking forward to the next chap:)
| ItsUpToYou chapter 10 . 12/1/2010
I like your story a lot. Tom is just the right mixture of evil and manipulative. It's wonderful. Just sad that there haven't been more scenes with him and Ginny (where he his conscious for a change);P
And harry. Yeah, I don't like him that much. He's right on his way on becoming a second Dumbles. Never the whole truth, eh?
Wonderful story. I hope you update fast.
| Intricacy chapter 10 . 11/30/2010
I confess: Too lazy to log in. Too lazy to type a review.
But after reading the chapter I thought you deserved something for your hard work ;D SO HI. NICE CHAPTER AND UPDATE SOON. IT WAS AWESOMESAUCE. /nod/
| Ilaaris chapter 10 . 11/30/2010
I liked it. Hope there is more soon.