|Reviews for LOST and LOST 2|
| Bella's New Moon chapter 9 . 12/31/2009
Good choice with Emm. He was a little too handsy/flirtatious with her. It made me uncomfortable,and obviously Edward too...
| Bella's New Moon chapter 8 . 12/31/2009
The obvious answer is of course, Alice. The strategically wise move would be Esme because she is the bind that ties the family and breaking apart the business means hurting the family...jus sayin...
| Bella's New Moon chapter 6 . 12/30/2009
Still love perceptive Simmons. Glad that he cares for Bella and that will hopefully help Edwards cause...
| Bella's New Moon chapter 4 . 12/30/2009
I'll bet he see's her and runs, and reevaluates his strategy...:)
| Bella's New Moon chapter 3 . 12/30/2009
I really like your story so far. Cool about the banking reference to your grandfather- very neat and makes it fun to know that you've woven some of your own history into the story. Makes it more realistic. Also really like that Bella has to deal with suitors. I can tell I'm going to really like Simmons. I was completely cracking up at his abandonment of Bella when Vaughn asked if they were together.
| potterlight chapter 11 . 12/24/2009
Let Bella be strong!
Her name better be at the end of the one company, that I cant spell, ha.
| Bella-Nympha chapter 16 . 12/17/2009
I could try to explain my feelings about this story but English is not my mother tongue and I'm afraid I won't be capable to find the right words to describe them. I could try to write a whole letter doing my best to make me understood and I think I would be leaving so many things unsaid...
I don't believe in sequels but I'm reading this story's one because I really think you're so good in writing it will be totally worth it. I'm giving you the chance to surprise me again.
Thank you for sharing your passion with all of us.
Just one word to sum up my opinion about Lost. PERFECT.
| lorilynn74 chapter 10 . 12/16/2009
That was great! Go Edward!
| Bella-Nympha chapter 13 . 12/16/2009
Simmons is Bella's fairy godmother!
I hope Edward will be playing his cards in the right way because Bella is really a hard bone to gnaw... She is fighting really hard.
| Bella-Nympha chapter 11 . 12/16/2009
yes, I feel the heat... badly.
I also want to dance with him. The same song, please...
As you can read I'm still here and I'm reviewing till the end of the story.
| Bella-Nympha chapter 8 . 12/16/2009
Not threatening and capable of making Bella laugh?
my bid is Emmett.
I'd love Alice coming, but Bella would be afraid of her seeing her decissions.
Bella's remarks using Edward's words are absolutely brilliant.
| Bella-Nympha chapter 4 . 12/15/2009
Ok, she's not the devil.
You're the devil.
Let's keep on reading about the party.
| Bella-Nympha chapter 2 . 12/15/2009
That was really good.
I'm hugely interested in keeping on reading. Obviously C-corp, is Cullen Corporation. Eager to read Bella discovering it.
| Emibacevj chapter 32 . 12/12/2009
Omg, your story is amazing! I loved the fact that is was in Simmon's point of view and you did an exceptionally good job of making him sound manly considering you are female. Haha. Thank you so much for writing this story! It was a great read, I loved the original "Lost" and I love this just the same maybe even more because it's more original. It centers around your own character, which is fantastic and I give you way more credit for writing this than I usually do for most fanfic writers. (: I think the only thing that bothered me a little bit was how similar it was in certain parts to the original Twilight but that is to be expected so it's actually not that bad. And finally I loved the ending! From seeing Simmon's being beaten by Alexei then being turned into a vampire to his life with Tonya as a vampire and how close everyone is to Bella and him joining up to do something they both love and have a great time doing. Great story! Thanks so much for writing!
P.S. Sorry for the length! (:
| Alecto Carrow chapter 16 . 11/26/2009
The BEST story ever, they should change it for New Moon