Reviews for LOST
bahahah chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
that was really good.

I LOVE THIS STROY!

i was a lil upset through how she was all like " i hate you go away "

okay not the real words yours were way better, but i still oved it non the less.

UP DATE?
Cue the Starlight chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
Nonononononono! Edward HAS to win Bella back. No other options! Don't make me come over there!
Ete Soleils chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
ljkoajdojfda;l!

are you kidding me? that chapter was freakin awesome! one of my favorites!

probably cuz of bellas plan.

that part was awesome.

even though it was underhanded.

:].

i so love this story!

i can't wait until the next chapter!
xluvedward32194x chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
GET TOGETHER ALL READY!
xluvedward32194x chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
AMAZING!
hij567 chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
You are evil and mean to keep this going on like this. My heart can not take any more! But as usual your wrote another amazing chapter.
jade chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
plz lz plz plz ! i need u to update as soon as possible! this story is so good! love the plot and everything... its so importantto have u update... ur the best writer i have everread
Acita chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
Aww. I actually liked this chapter a lot. It's very realistic, as far as how you've written your other chapters. It would seem strange if all of a sudden Bella threw herself into his arms again, you know?

Kudos. I love. _

Can't wait for the next update!

- Ari.
Mish chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
Stupid, stupid Bella! ARRGGHH!

I'm waiting...
Maria chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
I think the song Come to me by Vanessa Hudgens would be great for this chapter, the lyrics, about Bella setting Edward are the lyrics incase :]

Y'all need to get ready to hear,

the unbelieveable, indescribable

Vanessa Hudgens

Baby V

Everyday I try to play another game

But my heart can't take it

I try to find another boy

But all the while I can't face it

Why do I miss you so much?

I wanna stop to turn inside

oh baby please

give us one more try

See you out with all your friends

Laughing it up as you pretend

to have a good time, I know cause I'm living the same life

I'm about to got to say

we can't keep living this same way

so I'll be the one

yeah I'll say it I'll say it I'll say it I'll say it again

Baby come back to me

in my heart I still believe

we were meant to be

together so whatever it takes

Baby come back to me

I should've never set you free

love maybe

come back

I wanna call, but then I stall

cause after all, I just couldn't take it

cause if your play was to push me away

you know the day, my heart you'd break it

I know we made a mistake

it's just like your foolish pride

Come back to me

Let us try, let us try, let us try

Baby come back to me

in my heart I still believe

we were meant to be

together so whatever it takes

Baby come back to me

I should've never set you free

love maybe

come back

You know you miss your Baby V

And I can see that you think about me

so why do you act like you don't care

like all this love between us isn't there

I know that you're upset

I know I did you wrong

I know that you want me to pay for all the pain i've caused

but in the end it all comes down to just one thing

it's you and me

so I sing

Baby come back to me

in my heart I still believe

we were meant to be

together so whatever it takes

Baby come back to me

I should've never set you free

love maybe

come back
iSparkle chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
MAN! ugh stupid Bella!

Really good- you really got in there and i really liked this one. Your description is beautiful.

And... this time i doidn't cry. -.-
Sakurablossom009 chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
wow

that was an ingenious plan on Bella's behalf

XD
Ideletedthis chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
No! Bella is being so stupid! And I'm about to lose my sanity from not having the next chapter! Grr. I wanna know what happens. But anyway, you did a fabulous job with this chapter as usual. Can't wait til tomorrow!

~marie
captjackspeanut chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
GAH! I have to wait til monday to read the next chapters! I am leaving for Florida tomorrow and I will not have my laptop with me! *cries* Why must they be so STUBBORN?
she is brighter chapter 12 . 10/24/2007
come one, throw me a michael buble shaped BONE here!

\\amy\\
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