Reviews for LOST and LOST 2
Aspiring Empath chapter 4 . 10/16/2007
*passes out*

If I could scream without scaring the bajesus out of my parents, I would. Loved the chapter, HATE WHERE YOU ENDED IT! I wanted to keep reading. lol.

Edward...*sigh* Edward. I'm glad you put in the fact that he came back for her. It just wouldn't seem Edward-like if he hadn't. I love the amount of thought you put into the story line. There are no cracks or flaws in the story line. I mean it! Everything is so well explained.

Bella oh Bella. She finally gets a hint of the mysterious C and we all know what that means! EDWARD! Let's just see how fun the reunion will be. Shock and Awe or something a little less positive? I want you to update NOW! Oh well, I guess I'll have to wait until tomorrow.

Love it!

Shining Star.
LM2256 chapter 4 . 10/16/2007
ah ! i can't wait to find out what happens tomorrow ! i'll be checking back soon!

,LM
HelloBatty chapter 4 . 10/16/2007
Yay you updated! Great chapter, I wish you could put chapter 5 up tonight...
hij567 chapter 4 . 10/16/2007
If it is already done can't you post it now. It is so mean to leave us hanging like this!
elusivepoet chapter 2 . 10/16/2007
i love your fic. i couldn't stop laughing when simmons had bella go out with vaughn. i can't wait to read more! D
Insane-About-Twilight chapter 3 . 10/16/2007
Oh, wow. Very nice story. How could Bella be so oblivious? She knows exactly who "C" is. She's seeing all the clues in front of her eyes, but not really looking at them...

Update soon :)

-Marie-
Jessica chapter 3 . 10/16/2007
wow...i love this story...keep the chapters coming as quickly asd ou posibly can...lol this is an osm story...very original.
Aspiring Empath chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
Drinking coffee...untouched Bio notes sitting nearby.

I love this story! You have no idea! It's so original and so new and so...everything that I want to read. You do realize that I rarely read Twilight fanfiction anymore unless it's from you? I just love everything you write, it's not even funny!

So I love the continuous play on Bella's human traits and life. C-Corp...oh I can only imagine! Bella is gonna go after them without even realizing who it is! I am SO excited for an Edward chapter!

You rock my life.

Shining Star.
sdh chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
I am loving your story. I haven't read anything like this before. You are doing a great job. Just think of how proud Alice would be of Bella actually dressing in designer clothes. They have to see each other at some time - hopefully. Thanks for the frequent updates. I look forward to them.
jashaw chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
Please hurry I really need Edward!
kingdomfantasyanime453 chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
loved this i haven't seen anything like this before...

usually all the fanfiction that has edward leave..

always or sometimes ends up with bella a vamp in beg...or she all misery and stuff

not saying that she isn't...kinda...

but this one is really good ..and interesting...

if i didn't know any better i wouldve thought bella was a vampire

that was funny how simmons got them hooked up...

anyways loved it ...

i have a question...when you say edward chapter tomorow...do you mean he'll be in it or it'll be in his point or view...i guess i'll find out tomorrow...

UPDATE SOON
Book.Luver.14 chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
omg plz add more to it
XxMarie.Alice.Brendon.CullenxX chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
your story is amazing so far

-A
BrokenRecordofLove chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
Yes! A edward chapter! EEK! I love this chapter. It's absolutely perfect.

Taylor.
she is brighter chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
i still love michael buble. i intend on dpwnloading that song later tonight. now, however, i must stand by the fat C-Corp is CULLEN- Corp. a DUH!

\\amy\\
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