Reviews for Alternate Ending
kandisi chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Cute fic! Everyone seemed IC to boot, and I can definitely see Fred getting upset about losing four hundred dollars, being the penny-pincher he is. xD

ashleylover360 chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Hellow my name is Josie and i have accutuly seen that epicode. you did a really good job writing this and i loved it!
Rivergoddess16 chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
All in all I'd say it was good! Writing for TV shows can be really hard, and you did a nice job of putting what the viewers would see into words. (ie. Lucy's innocent face" That one cracked me up becuase I knew just what you were talking about!)

As I die hard Lucy fan, I knew what epsiode you were writing for, but a little background of what was going on wouldn't hurt, and that way people who haven't seen all the shows would know what's happening - still it was very funny! And nobody acted out of character!

I hope you write more stories for I love Lucy, it's really an un-tapped gold mine of possibilities!