Reviews for Wonderland Dream
nhrc chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
You write very well.
Kyndsie chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Pardon me, please, but I need to go get some water to drink. Cold water. Ice cold water.

Skillfully done, bravo! Too frequently, writers overdo their descriptions, which weakens the reader's investment in the scene, and their remotional response. You chose your details well, and ended the scene / story very wisely indeed.
Silwen Prince chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
"like the rose relinquishes its blossom to be plucked."- beautiful simile!

"He parted their bodies and looked her over as though she had been a piece of flawlessly made pastry, and he was contemplating just where to bite first."- Wonderfully creepy, game me shivers!
Nopa LaMais chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Ohh, you got my interest with your other oneshot, I had to investigate more! :)

This indeed was dark, but also powerful and sexy. :) I like the mood you created with the words you used to descrie everything. I particularly liked how you discribed Jareth as a cobra.

Can't wait to read more of your work.
ScarletArtist chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Wow Rhiannon - this was a great way to start the morning!
Nightzchild chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Beautifully Written! 'Like a spider's web', 'like the rose' - you have some lovely imagery here. Well done.
notwritten chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Very nice story. I liked it. More please. Have a good day tomorrow. _
Carrie88 chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Ah, dreams are always so tasty, yet unfulfiling :) That was great!