Reviews for At Last
anamcharalove chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
That was a little odd. Catfights to win Jarod are not my favorite, but it served its purpose. I didn't like how you just threw in a few sentences to finish the story. And all of a sudden it was THE END with no details.
Nancy chapter 3 . 10/14/2007
Thanks for the story. Glad that the Centre is gone (but no mention of slimy Lyle or evil Raines). I would enjoy your telling about J and MP dating - how it got started and how they are together. The description is the delicious part for the reader. Please continue - have you considered what the two of them together - could NOW do with the Centre? Oh, the options, the options. Keep up the good work - look forward to more of this story.
juju chapter 3 . 10/14/2007
oh that's great !really good !i'm looking forward reading the next chapter!
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 3 . 10/14/2007
hey! I'm glad you've decided to start writing MPJR fics, this was a good one. Though on the short side, but good nonetheless, keep it up!