|Reviews for Beyond|
| coffeemaster143 chapter 12 . 3/24/2016
I loved this! I hated how much Umbridge got away with in the books.
| LuKrieg chapter 3 . 9/11/2014
Sudden character death at the end... oh I will miss the old narrator ;)
| jaqjaq123 chapter 12 . 5/23/2013
Reading chapter 12
Hahahaha Hahahaha Hahahaha Hahahaha
*falls to the floot laughing* Hahahaha Hahahaha Hahahaha Hahahaha Hahahaha Hahahaha Hahahaha
Man I would LOVE to have been there
| Lunaris-wind chapter 40 . 3/9/2013
This review is for all 4 parts of the Never Alone series, and is posted in review for each.
I think that the undertaking here is impressive. The story stays true to characters, and to the HP universe, while crafting a completely unique story and adding many good, but maybe unneeded, noncanon characters over the four 'books'.
The story starts well, and gets better, but somewhere in Book 2 or 3, it seemed to lose its way, find it again, and get confused on multiple occasions. The final battle of Hogwarts definitely felt like that it was haphazard at best, and I had a horrible time keeping track of the action.
The relationships between characters, likewise, starts off well, and very interestingly in some cases, but begin to lose steam as a plethora of new creations are thrown into the mix.
Overall, I liked this quadrilogy, but it can be a very rocky roller coaster to read through the entire thing, with some very entertaining ups, and disappointing downs.
| tanithlipsky chapter 40 . 10/13/2011
| wizmage chapter 40 . 3/7/2010
That was great. Poor Ginny, i hate that she had to die.
| Sardonic Irony chapter 40 . 12/17/2009
well done. As i have said before, this is a great fic. besides the cringeworthy movie lines you have done a brilliant job! you have created jne of the best OCs ever in Libra. i hope that one day you do a pairing between her and harry.
| Sardonic Irony chapter 24 . 12/16/2009
This is brilliant. Normaly i'd only have reviewed on th last chapter but i have to say that this is a good fic but i have one or two problems. I think it was a bad idea to give the DA wandless magic, it kind of makes Pansy, Harry anf the other two (as well as Libra) seem far less powerful and leaves them as kind of nothing special. I mean i was all for the idea of wandless magic but to teach it to the DA was a mistake. but hey, it is your fic. My other gripe (sorry) is the movie lines. Why put them in? I wouldn't care if it was say once or twice in the fic but you use them far more than that. It doesn't matter to much but i cringe everytime i read a line like that copied word for word from the movie.
| the naru foxxx chapter 5 . 10/22/2009
Wow the end of the chapter
Gave me a well you no.
| the naru foxxx chapter 3 . 10/22/2009
Yay the weding agine!
| the naru foxxx chapter 2 . 10/22/2009
Yay the weding!
| Lynabelle chapter 40 . 4/22/2009
Hello, I've read the other books but I couldn't be stopped to review. Sorry 'bout that. I am very much in love with this story. The first book started a little rocky but the story has really captured me. I really like couples like Harry/Pansy or Harry with any female slytherin really. I like to see the little explored couples. This a well written and planned story, bravo. I don't normally like OCs very much but you did a really good job with Libra, she's great. I think you could explain some things in the story better, like Ginny/Blaise. We never were told much about them. And if Harry, Ron, and Hermione are going to get in trouble for the Crucios or if Blaise will get in trouble for the Killing Curse. And what the trio feels about casting an unforgivable.
| Stunna21 chapter 40 . 2/16/2009
good story and can't wait to read the sequel so update soon and keep writing this is great and do you.
| David Fishwick chapter 40 . 9/3/2008
Excellent idea and I enjoyed reading this.
| mackgirl chapter 18 . 4/25/2008
Really liked this chapter and I think you did a great job with mixing in the canon and your own stuff, I know how hard that is to do.