|Reviews for Hostage|
| newperson chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
This was a very cute story! I love the idea, and everyone was so in character it was priceless.
There are a few spelling errors I noticed, such as perpouse ought to be spelled purpose and I think it makes more sense to say "It was time to find Dilaundau and his men…" than "It was time to find Dilaundau and his man…"
There might be more, but those were the ones that distracted me enough to remember them by the time I got to the end. Besides mechanics, I really like this plot and your humor!
| Tempo Vivace chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
This seriously made my day. Most hilarious thing ever, and, to boot, it was even in character! FABULOUS WORK!
| Cyra chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
This was fun! Loved the maids and the strip poker and the infamous "L" word-good job!
| Keda Ish chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
That was super cute. I liked it alot actually. Hm...maybe that says something about me.
| Sakura Kaoru-Chan chapter 1 . 10/14/2007