|Reviews for Gundam SEED: Memories|
| 00Zy99 chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Great idea, but very much lacking in depth. Please go into much more detail regarding the events described in the chapter. Introduce OCs better too. Look at Solid Shark and Dragoon Swordsman for the best examples in SEED (they're brothers, so maybe it runs in the genes, or maybe the slacks). Go back and do this, repost the chapter, and things should go great from there.