|Reviews for I'm tired|
| MikariStar chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Very well written and it fits the characters. Bittersweet and well done.
| Orin chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
That wasn’t bad at all! Don’t know what you’re talking about! 3 The only nitpick I could have was that it might have been a wee bit… repetitive, but because you were only working on the basis of those four important words ‘That’s enough. I’m tired’… you were limited from the getgo, so it was going to be. O You pulled it off marvellously btw.
I lovelove how you read into that scene too! Was one of my fav moments in the series and you really brought out Chika’s reaction very well! Shito admitting to being weary Shito admitting to a weakness WTF for Chika. XD; Brilliant! X3 It really was. And so Chika had to get Shito back to a place where he could snark at him again! XD Ohgod.
And oh, how you had Shito use Chika’s hand to prop his head up, and use his own to hit Chika… well… actions do speak louder than words (for Chika too!) and that was a lovely touch. O
Wasn’t bad at all. Liked it muchly.
| Mime Harlequin chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
..You write some of the nicest Shito/Chika fictions. Buut, I read on your profile that you had an idea for an Allen/Lavi fic? So I hope youll write that one. :D
| chinagirl114 chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
cute! you write the best Chika/Shito fics your characterisation is also nice
good luck in you tests